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Oct 09, 2010 00:06

and the stars remember us, (TenII/Rose), PG-13
He remembers snow that wasn’t snow and the tingle of new skin as her palm brushed over his., 1126

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:rowofstars, challenge 52, :nylana

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psyfi_geekgirl October 9 2010, 08:33:55 UTC

Very lovely and graceful, like a (single) fluttering heart.

rowofstars October 9 2010, 21:32:03 UTC

Wow that's such a lovely comment. Thank you!

happyfew October 9 2010, 10:32:14 UTC

He turns the shed into a workshop, where a burgeoning TARDIS grows out of an old television and spills over into a toaster oven, and she plants sunflowers under the kitchen window.

♥

This is all so so so so so wonderful darling, and I love the last paragraph most of all.

rowofstars October 9 2010, 21:31:29 UTC

Thank you my sweet! ♥♥♥

momentmusical October 9 2010, 10:36:15 UTC

Oh my god. I'm completely awestruck by how well this complements we write our tragedies in the stars, which I loved with a burning passion. This one is sadder, quieter - there's less bombast, but full of everyday colours like getting bandaged up on a toilet seat and the hope of sunflowers under a kitchen window. It's beautiful and achingly vivid, in all its own way. The two balance each other out just so perfectly, I can't even.

YOU'RE INCREDIBLE ♥.

rowofstars October 9 2010, 21:34:11 UTC

OH YOU. ♥

Thank you so much, bb. I worry that it doesn't live up to its predecessor, but I'm so glad you liked it. I thought perhaps I wouldn't see a comment from you for a while, I know how terribly busy you are, but this makes my day.

YOU'RE INCREDIBLE ♥.
NO YOU. ♥♥♥

momentmusical October 9 2010, 22:36:29 UTC

As if I could ever, ever say no to a Lindsay fic, even in the middle of exam week! But that comment was way too short for my liking, and totally did not adequately convey how much I love your writing. Nothing I say ever could, so here, have the biggest heart that this comment box will allow:

♥

ILU

rowofstars October 10 2010, 00:18:25 UTC

Long or short, your comments are always enough.

marcasite October 9 2010, 12:23:16 UTC

So, so glad you wrote this! ♥

This is absolutely gorgeous, breathtaking in its entire tone. I love the little moments and how they charge forward with this new life. Together.

GUH! ♥♥

rowofstars October 9 2010, 21:34:46 UTC

Hee! Thank you for giving me the idea. I was pretty instantly inspired and that hasn't happened for a long time. ♥

develish1 October 9 2010, 15:57:25 UTC

I just love this, it's beautiful :)

rowofstars October 9 2010, 21:35:06 UTC

Thank you!