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Aug 27, 2010 10:31

A perfectly uneventful day at the shops (1/2), TenII/Rose, R
Her instructions to him had been easy enough, but for the life of him he just could. Not. Focus. He was trapped in a violently colorful subculture of satin, lace, organza and mesh and he didn’t know what to do with himself. 1, 407 words.
A/N: I picked Vision

A perfectly uneventful day at the shops... )

:psyfi_geekgirl, challenge 48

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develish1 August 27 2010, 18:13:13 UTC
I don't think I've ever read a better description of the terror that seems to strike most men when you drag them into an underwear store, well done love.

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psyfi_geekgirl August 28 2010, 01:39:11 UTC
YAY! Thanks :)

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housemaid79 August 27 2010, 18:19:54 UTC
Thoroughly enjoyed this...running off to read part 2!

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psyfi_geekgirl August 28 2010, 01:40:37 UTC
Thanks! I was glad to see you guys post almost immediately after I put it up. Made me smile :)

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bratflorida August 27 2010, 23:11:52 UTC
ROFL!!! Oh, how clearly I can see this in my head! You've perfectly captured the terror of a man inside Victoria's Secret! LOVE this:

>>Ye Gods! This wasn’t an underwear store, it was a giant advert for sex! How could she have dragged him in here and expected him to be of any use?

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psyfi_geekgirl August 28 2010, 01:53:05 UTC
Hee hee (icon)!

The TERROR was also confirmed by my husband, btw as I quizzed him on the (confused) inner workings of the male brain whilst perusing Vicky's. Rose's outfit however was inspired by Fredericks' new catalogue on the inside cover... Aww hell--here's the link:

Rose's "outfit"

Truly Rose!BAMF worthy...

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bratflorida August 28 2010, 02:06:46 UTC
A picture is worth a thousand words, and now I can envision your fic with the EXACT outfit. You're lucky that your hubby will go into VS with you. My ex wouldn't even stand OUTSIDE the store while I shopped...

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develish1 August 28 2010, 03:31:35 UTC
I think I must be blessed. My hubby once went into Ann Summers alone and no, you can't borrow him, lol

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professor_spork August 28 2010, 01:56:57 UTC
*shakes head at self* Funny how the thing that really gets me isn't the humor or the sexiness, but the way you've pointed out how Rose has changed. So very true.

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psyfi_geekgirl August 29 2010, 03:19:06 UTC
Oh, I do know how much you love BAMF!Rose!
Thanks, glad you enjoyed it!

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akkajemo August 29 2010, 08:11:12 UTC
Woooohoooo! Your first two-parter!!! And what a steamy one! Oh yeaaaaaahhh... (I'll be in my bunk.)
Thanks luv! :D

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