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Aug 21, 2010 14:00

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And there's that feeling again, the two of them falling through space, anchored only by the press of their fingers and palms., 698

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housemaid79 August 21 2010, 20:07:30 UTC
This is lovely - this tiny little glimpse into their relationship. It all feels very in-character. They barely say anything, but they manage to communicate so much. I loved this line:

He follows her gaze, the natural thing to do when it’s not directed at him.

That is so the Doctor. Love this. ♥

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2nd2ndalto August 22 2010, 15:33:45 UTC
Thanks so much! I'm glad you felt it was in character - sometimes I get a bit worried when there's not much dialogue, wondering if everyone's getting their point across! Glad you liked it.

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2nd2ndalto August 22 2010, 15:35:14 UTC
Thanks for the lovely review! You make an excellent point, although it's not something I actually considered when I was writing.

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lovexwentxred August 21 2010, 22:34:10 UTC
So beautiful and absolutely in character. I love reading pieces that happen post-Krop Tor. Loved this. :D

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2nd2ndalto August 22 2010, 15:36:11 UTC
Thank you! I have a thing for post-Krop Tor pieces as well. :)

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professor_spork August 22 2010, 02:03:33 UTC
*grabby hands* Oh, I just. Themmmmmmmmmm.

<3333

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2nd2ndalto August 22 2010, 15:36:28 UTC
Thanks!

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beingfacetious August 22 2010, 03:03:08 UTC
Ohhhhh, this is beautiful. Both of them are so in character, especially Rose; I love that she looks right at him when she says it, and that as soon as it's out she can relax. I loved this.

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