A tall, skinny man glares at her as they cut their way through the dense jungle. With an irritated grumble he answers “Captain Jack.” 1,539 words
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What fun! I enjoyed this lots. The parallels between the two Jacks will never not be funny.
One note: when you write “You here that Doctor? Captain Jack!”, that should be hear, not here. Homophone mix-ups are annoying, since spellcheck doesn't catch them.
WHEEEE! Cap'n Jack! FTMFW!! All my favorite Captains are indeed named Jack. Except for Captain Tightpants, but Mal is pretty close to jack in the long run, right? Heh.
Super story. I swear I could see the whole thing happening right in front of my eyes :)
^yes this! I mean, you can be an awesome captain if you're not named Jack (i.e. Mal) but if you want a captain to be instantly amazing, just name him Jack. I think it's one of the laws of the universe, kinda like gravity.
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But you know what? This feels like snippets of a long multi-chapter fic. *hint, hint* ;)
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One note: when you write “You here that Doctor? Captain Jack!”, that should be hear, not here. Homophone mix-ups are annoying, since spellcheck doesn't catch them.
Finally, laser-shooting humanoid crabs FTW!
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Also? Humanoid crabs... hehe! Very PotC. ^^
Oh, and kiss. Yay!
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Super story. I swear I could see the whole thing happening right in front of my eyes :)
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Great fic too!
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