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Jul 29, 2010 17:22

Ahoy! Ten/Rose, PG-13

“Sorry. Come again. His name’s what?”

A tall, skinny man glares at her as they cut their way through the dense jungle. With an irritated grumble he answers “Captain Jack.” 1,539 words ( Read more... )

:the_idiotgirl, challenge 44

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captaintish July 30 2010, 03:41:44 UTC
This is lovely. And I love the idea of Ten and Rose getting involved in an adventure with Jack (Sparrow). I love their reaction to his name.

But you know what? This feels like snippets of a long multi-chapter fic. *hint, hint* ;)

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asahifirsa July 31 2010, 10:14:12 UTC
I think so too, after all there's no hint of the TARDIS, they might have to look for it :)

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goldencinders July 30 2010, 06:39:59 UTC
YUS. Lazer crabs Y/Y? this was awesome and cute and funny. Loved it!

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tardis_stowaway July 30 2010, 09:10:59 UTC
What fun! I enjoyed this lots. The parallels between the two Jacks will never not be funny.

One note: when you write “You here that Doctor? Captain Jack!”, that should be hear, not here. Homophone mix-ups are annoying, since spellcheck doesn't catch them.

Finally, laser-shooting humanoid crabs FTW!

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quean_of_swords July 30 2010, 09:20:35 UTC
Hehe! Captain Jack, ftw!

Also? Humanoid crabs... hehe! Very PotC. ^^

Oh, and kiss. Yay!

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rubberbisquit July 31 2010, 03:02:40 UTC
WHEEEE! Cap'n Jack! FTMFW!! All my favorite Captains are indeed named Jack. Except for Captain Tightpants, but Mal is pretty close to jack in the long run, right? Heh.

Super story. I swear I could see the whole thing happening right in front of my eyes :)

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lindaleriel August 6 2010, 04:34:07 UTC
^yes this! I mean, you can be an awesome captain if you're not named Jack (i.e. Mal) but if you want a captain to be instantly amazing, just name him Jack. I think it's one of the laws of the universe, kinda like gravity.

Great fic too!

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