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madgirlwithabox in then_theres_us

Berries Ten2/Rose (pg-13)

Jul 10, 2010 14:33

A/N Sorry it's unbeta'd and bad. I procrastinated and wanted to make it past the deadline.

( Strawberries, at least, are something he thinks he can manage. He buys crates of them on a whim, tying them haphazardly to the back of his blue bicycle since he couldn’t get a driver’s license. He seeks things he feels he can handle desperately in this new world. In this new world, with all these new sensations, he can’t handle much. )

challenge 41, :madgirlwithabox

Comments 5

professor_spork July 10 2010, 22:01:58 UTC

HEE. Oh my god. I don't know why there's such an influx of Cloen stories this round, but I LOVE IT.

he accidentally puts his hand in the ice cream and she can’t breath and then he leans over the ridiculous meal and kisses her and she really can’t breath.

<3333333333333

madgirlwithabox July 10 2010, 23:52:08 UTC

I know. All week I kept going 'CLOEN!' It makes me happy when there's a lot of Cloen stories. Because cloen is luff. <33

juliet316 July 10 2010, 22:50:13 UTC

Very nice. I also love the subtle twist that's implied that it's Rose that can't say the words as at the end it seems like it's a big deal when she does say them. Overall very sweet.

madgirlwithabox July 10 2010, 23:52:20 UTC

<33 Thankies.

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madgirlwithabox July 12 2010, 03:27:39 UTC

Thankies