Daughter of Eve, Eleven/Rose (PG)
Rose could have never known that this very closet had once been the start of a wonderful story, but she should have expected it. The unpredictable and impossible always seemed to accompany innocent looking boxes. 2, 078.
A/N: Crossover with The Chronicles of Narnia.
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Oh, I cannot begin to tell you how her story broke my heart when I first read it. I could never... I mean, Susan! Who was less quick to believe than Lucy, but Aslan had proved to her time and time again and oh, her joy at riding on Aslan's back... her ending really haunted me. But you are right, as I grow older the more possible and realistic her story seemed and though I was still sad and frustrated, I could also see how she might have ended up like that.
Despite whatever estrangement though, I could not believe that Susan ever stopped loving her family. And the death of them, all of them at once! If anything could shake her, could plant that one seed that might grow in time, I believed very strongly that this was it. I wanted to give her time too, time in this fic to mature, to wise up a bit, so in the end I was content that this was how I managed to save my own little retelling of Susan Penvensie. And I am even more glad that you found it believable
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I am HONORED to be chosen by you!
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