Comments | then_theres_us: Come Together Ten.5/Rose (pg-13)

madgirlwithabox in then_theres_us

Come Together Ten.5/Rose (pg-13)

Jun 05, 2010 14:05

Inspired by Fever by Michael Buble(did I do that right)
Also, no one even bother for voting for this one. I wrote it because I felt there was a sad lack of Human10/Rose fics and the idea amused me. It's un-beta'd and crammed, but I really wanted to do this challenge. It's much more cracky than intended, and is so horrible *hangs head in shame* I ( Read more... )

challenge 36, :madgirlwithabox

Comments 12

anon_aspasia June 5 2010, 21:37:31 UTC

I don't think this is horrible (or too cracky) at all. I like the way that the fever (and Oncoming Faint) allows you to point out all the awkward, occasionally painful, uncomfortable parts of first-time sex...and the ways that the emotional and physical need steamrollers right over them sometimes. I've got a soft spot for fics that don't make everything perfect, but still make it *right*, and you pull that off here quite nicely.

madgirlwithabox June 5 2010, 21:40:08 UTC

Thank you. I set high standards for myself, especially since everyone else on here is so amazing. I graduated this week, so until yesterday I was busy (rehearsal, party, actual ceremony). But now that I'm on break I can really work on them.

spellweaver731 June 5 2010, 21:53:18 UTC

First of all this was very cute and funny so no need to feel ashamed.

Second I love your icon to bits.

madgirlwithabox June 5 2010, 21:56:09 UTC

Thank you. :3 You can steal it if you like, it's my own.

spellweaver731 June 6 2010, 03:33:35 UTC

Thanks, I think I'll take you up on that.

siriuslyblack95 June 5 2010, 22:38:29 UTC

This was really good :)
was not horrible at all.

madgirlwithabox June 5 2010, 22:45:13 UTC

thank you

professor_spork June 7 2010, 17:45:10 UTC

Why would you ever be worried? This was *adorable.* And I agree-- there should always be MOAR CLOEN.

lamarnza June 8 2010, 23:00:46 UTC

Thank you. Yes. CLOEN ftw. You can never get enough cloen (I need to write a fic about them doing it in a tree, since my friends made up a whole scenario at the park [YES, that is what we do in our free time])

professor_spork June 8 2010, 23:46:00 UTC

*chants* Doctor and Ros-ie, sittin' in a tree, S-N-O-G-G-I-N-G.

(F-A-L-L-I-N-G in loooooove.)

lamarnza June 8 2010, 23:57:24 UTC

yesss (o, sorry, lamarnza is madgirlwithabox, I just have a separate fic account xD)

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madgirlwithabox June 26 2010, 16:42:16 UTC

Thanky.