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mellaithwen in then_theres_us

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May 22, 2010 01:41

Before the taking of toast and tea., Ten II/Rose, pg.
She mixes the batter, by the light of the streetlamp that sits beyond the garden fence. Twirling the spoon around the thick substance until it’s smooth, licking the excess off of the spoon as soon as it’s all separated and eventually put into the oven. She can’t sleep, but what she doesn’t ( Read more... )

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erateini May 22 2010, 04:27:58 UTC

YUM! ;)

mellaithwen May 22 2010, 12:19:12 UTC

hee! :D

goldencinders May 22 2010, 06:43:34 UTC

I just...
Yeah.
This was beautiful and made me want to cry but in a good way.
Thanks :)

mellaithwen May 22 2010, 12:21:22 UTC

aww thanks for reading again, I really appreciate it!! :):)

sunnytyler001 May 23 2010, 11:45:26 UTC

Awww!!! Beautiful! :D

mellaithwen June 6 2010, 20:56:37 UTC

aww thank you!!

amberfocus May 23 2010, 12:56:54 UTC

That was lovely. I love the way their emotions ran all over the place and how baking had such a calming effect on them.

mellaithwen June 6 2010, 20:57:07 UTC

thanks for noticing that especially, it was one of my intentions :)

angel_b33 May 23 2010, 22:03:08 UTC

Aw this is beautiful!! It brought a tear to my eye, it's lovely! well done!
x

mellaithwen June 6 2010, 20:57:44 UTC

aww thank you so much for reading!!