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[2nd2ndalto]

almost enough, Ten/Rose, R
They lie tangled together, afterwards, heat from their bodies conspiring with heat from the sun overhead to make them sleepy and sticky and slow, 593

Comments

[scifishipper]

That is gorgeous. Hot. Sexy. Desperate. And little painful.

*saving to memories*

[2nd2ndalto]

Ooh, I'm honoured you enjoyed this enough to "memory" it! It was indeed a little painful. I'm planning on writing more fluff next - I generally like my fics to make me go "awww" instead of "ouch".

[scifishipper]

It's the pain that keeps it from fluffing out. It's a subtle piece, not in your face sex or love, just enough to make it sweet and special and possibly rare. I'm going to check out your whofic.com stories, too. Well done.

[2nd2ndalto]

Thank you very much. I really appreciate the feedback.

[lorelaisquared]

Awwww. I love the mix of obvious love and overwhelming need between them and the fact that they are trying to help each other overcome their scars from the time apart.

Really well written and definitely sexy :)

This was my favourite line although it totally breaks my heart:

The time apart left its scars on both of them, no matter how much he'd like to deny it. Now it's always possibly the last time ever. This dark thought seeps ruthlessly into his mind, leaving him raw and defenseless. Oh I just want to huggle them both!

Nicely done!

[2nd2ndalto]

Thanks a lot! I went back and forth about leaving that part out and reducing the angst level... I want to huggle them too!

[harpinred]

That was beautimus! I love how atmospheric and desperate it was.

Lovely :)

[2nd2ndalto]

Thanks very much!

[jellybean728]

Too often they fall upon each other with a desperation that leaves marks, both of them trying to get enough (and it's never enough) before it finally really is the last time.

Oh, how awful and beautiful. Part of me hopes some day they'll overcome this, but part of me hopes that it's always so passionate.

[2nd2ndalto]

Yes, hopefully they can keep the passion but tone down the desperation. Thanks for commenting!

[rowofstars]

Guh. So gorgeous and sexy, but full of love and meaning at the same time. Very nice.

[2nd2ndalto]

Thank you! :)