challenge entry

[crimsoncookie]

challenge: [13] burn
title: you said
word count: 450
notes: a brinatha story. ♥

Comments

[burningmayo]

Very nice. :) It's a great look into Erit's head, I think.

[crimsoncookie]

yay. ♥ thank you!

cannot... stop... watching... dancing... icon...

[windbourne]

There's so much love here, wrapped up in a terrible tangible ball of uncertainty and worry and disconcerted 'huh'? It's beautiful and gives me wibbles and wobbles and kind of makes me want to cry, because I've been on both sides and neither side is good, even though sometimes...sometimes it works out. :x

[crimsoncookie]

...♥

i just... i hope so. ♥ thank you so much. this comment is wonderfully lovely and makes me wibble, too.

& your icon is so cute. omg.

[morgyne]

But when you're hurt for real, you won't say anything.
Ahhh, brilliant. I love this so much, thank you for sharing. You are wonderful at showing instead of telling :3

[crimsoncookie]

eee thank you darling. ♥ i'm really glad you love it!

[schizo_niko]

I like the very introspective tone of this. The whole thing was like being swept up in a wave or something, silly as that sounds. I liked it a lot. :)

[crimsoncookie]

sometimes i like to think of really getting into a story or a character as diving, so, mm. ♥ i like that image.

thank you very much!

[nickersonism]

I love the use of silence, on how frustrated she is when he won't speak, and how much he can say with few words. I loved the bit, for instance, about the many meanings of "Erit".

Thanks.

[crimsoncookie]

i think i brought a lot of my own experience into it - staring at someone you're just beginning to know and being like talk, talk, talk, argh. of course i'm no good at it either. :x

...that cactushead has a gift with not saying words. ♥

thank you. ♥