somewhat climactic, if you like that kind of thing

[themonkeytwin]

Title: The Double Sword Cross
Ficverse: Leverage & The Princess Bride
Series: The Princess Bride Job, 16/18
Rating: Gen / PG-13
Length: 1600 ish / 29,500 ish
Characters: Team Leverage, Westley, Humperdinck, Buttercup, the king, Inigo, Rugen
Summary: Fencing. Fighting.

Comments

[lmx_v3point3]

Wooooo! :D I love that you kept Inigo's revenge as is, it was my favourite bit of the film. Great job

[themonkeytwin]

Hell yes, you don't mess with perfection. You just thank the writers and describe it!

Thanks :)

[deepbluemermaid]

YAY YAY YAY! Oh, the awesomeness of Inigo is undiminished - actually it's amplified, because he could have let Eliot kill Rugen but he found the strength to do it himself.

And how brilliant to have the king intervene in the chapel! I did wonder how they were going to get Buttercup to safety otherwise...

You continue to rock :)

[themonkeytwin]

The awesomeness of Inigo cannot be diminished! I fell a little bit in love with him all over again while doing this chapter. And I do believe this is the perfect time to remember to say how much I love your Inigo icon! It kind of captures the awesomeness perfectly. :)

Yeah, I always felt sorry for the king a bit; I always wanted to give him a bit of dignity back. I like to believe (as you can see) that if he could actually be made to notice what was going on, he'd actually do something about it. Probably not really true, but that's what the liberty of fanfic affords us....