Dream Eater - Ch. 1 - "How Many Pixels in a Double Rainbow?"
Title: Dream Eater
Chapter: 1/? "How Many Pixels in a Double Rainbow?"
Rating: G
Notes: I thought I'd distract you guys with some writing before I got back to Japan Trip entries... This is the first chapter I wrote of my Dream Eater series for Writers' Club. It's unbeta'd, full of crack and the main character doesn't even have a name... Well, I do ( Read more... )
Chapter: 1/? "How Many Pixels in a Double Rainbow?"
Rating: G
Notes: I thought I'd distract you guys with some writing before I got back to Japan Trip entries... This is the first chapter I wrote of my Dream Eater series for Writers' Club. It's unbeta'd, full of crack and the main character doesn't even have a name... Well, I do ( Read more... )
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"The only reason I knew we were moving fast was the silent wind that blew past us, ruffling our clothes and hair." when i read that i put a lock from my hair too,i felt like it was blowing! :P I mean the story dragged me in... :) And i think that boy remembers the main character too!
Please continue! xD
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But yeah, at first I wasn't sure how to express their speed. I played it out in my mind like an anime scene. xD I thought "If two people are flying against a plain white backround, it won't look like their moving... UNLESS I add some wind~!"
I think you'll like the next chapter better. I'm gonna post it now!
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