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Title: there’s a skyline in oklahoma
Author: velvet_midnight
Summary: a woman, a man, a past life neither one wants brought to light.
Notes: the title comes from the Common Rotation song Oklahoma. Ficmix forthcoming. Also; this is a new style for me.
( there's a skyline in oklahoma )
Author: velvet_midnight
Summary: a woman, a man, a past life neither one wants brought to light.
Notes: the title comes from the Common Rotation song Oklahoma. Ficmix forthcoming. Also; this is a new style for me.
( there's a skyline in oklahoma )
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Babe? That was seriously STELLAR. I like the format, and I like the characters and I like that, for some reason, the fact that everything is in lower case somehow draws me in closer. I like Hannah&Jessica and Jessica&Alex and then having the conflict between the, er, three of them and I WANT MORE OF THIS AND IT'S BACKSTORY IF AT ALL POSSIBLE!
Where'd you get this idea?!
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Thank you thank you!! Good, the lower case didn't overwhelm the story? Very good very good. LOL three of them, hadn't thought of it like that, but YAY YES & OMG OMG OMG I CAN TOTALLY DO THAT BECAUSE YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOVE HANNAH xD
Uhm, listening to Oklahoma & pondering what life would be like if I were a RENEGADE like the Winchesters. Fo realz. Lol fandom gives me so many crazy ideas.
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Oh, And this totally reminds me of a story I wrote, but it;s kind of fluffy and from a guy's perspective and it's only the reincarnation thing. I have to say yours is more original.
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I also like how you made the past take over the present [that was what you were going for?]
Yes? I don't actually know what I was going for, but yes, I think. lol
Oooooh, shall check out the linkylinky you gave me. Also; reincarnation? Hmm. I was actually going for "Jessica" being her nom de plume, as it were, like how the Boys go under pseudonymes (sp?) when they show up somewhere new & official? Is that how it came across, cos I should probably fix that?
THANK YOU *giggles & twirls you*
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