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arobynsung September 28 2010, 04:44:00 UTC
I liked the darkness of this.
I enjoyed the rhythms of the color crimson and Narcissa's perception of Lily and what she's supposed to feel, or not feel. That last line especially :)

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prunesquallormd September 28 2010, 15:09:53 UTC
Ooooh. This is really lovely. Very dark, and rather mysterious and atmospheric. It has a very nice poetic twist, too.
All in all, rather beautiful :)

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