Fic: Kisses and Lies

[thelilalbatross]

I finally finished my fic! It's been an interesting few days while I worked on it, but I'm pretty darn happy with it now.

I wanted to challenge myself, firstly to write AT ALL after the huge drought that was 2006, and secondly to focus on details and capturing the emotion of a moment. So this fic does focus on moments, not even whole scenes but

Comments

[liljames]

You know I love it already, you captured the characters perfectly. :)

[dollsome]

Ooh, this is fantastic! It was so great to relive all of these beautiful moments between them through this, and you just depicted Kate's perspective so well. I especially loved the second one.

Welcome back into the world of fanfic! ;-)

[sellthelie]

That is wonderful! I love how it has all of Kates thoughts for their moments together. I love this.

[darbi42]

Oh, I wish this was longer...I'd love to see how you would delve into all the events even through 'I Do'. However, this was very well done.

[lil_orli]

beautiful beautiful

Was this what heroism really was? Not sailing into the sunset, but lying helpless on the floor with a swollen gunshot wound and the certainty that you are going to die? She felt tears sting in her eyes as she looked at him, the man with all the swagger torn away.

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