Short Ficlet: Helpless, In This Haunted Place (Hr/R, PG-13)

[theleapingmuse]

Title: Helpless, In This Haunted Place
Author: theleapingmuse
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Hr/R
Words: 324
Disclaimer: Never mine.
A/N: For the lovely dreame_waever who requested Hr/R in 2nd POV. *Luff* to inocciduous for the quick look-over!

Comments

[grea]

Well written. Good job.

I'm thoroughly depressed now. haha.

[theleapingmuse]

Thank you, and I'm sorry!! *offers you chocolate*

[grea]

chocolate!

*ponders*maybe I should be depressed more often...

[approximedic]

Oh. You cruel, cruel woman.

That was absolutely wonderful. And sad and heartwrenching and I want to give Hermione a good KICK somewhere painful. This is so different from the normal fluff Hr/R and tis utter.. utter.. *waves hands wildly*.

:)

You know how much I love your second person fics.

[theleapingmuse]

I'm very happy you liked!! :D

I've never read or written any Hr/R (besides canon), so I figured I couldn't go wrong with Teh Dark. *g* I liked the image of Ron sitting broken in his bed, while Hermione just..walked away. Evol, evol me.

:D

[chesnutella]

:o. That was a wonderful and unexpected distraction from study.

That collection of words is, as you say, evol. But Brilliant. It bowled me over, and my mindset was on the various attchments and nerve supplies of the gluteal region!

You do realise we won't hear the end of this now though, don't you? :P
And lets watch as Dreame goes off and frantically reads/writes 2nd POV fics instead of studying for her test! Hehe, evol! :P. *(And watch me get distracted as I search for more of your fics.)

Nice work!

[theleapingmuse]

I'm glad you enjoyed!

Dreame won't find any new 2nd POV here. *g* She's read them all already.

And *gasp* no more reading fic for the two of you until you're done studying that undoubtedly difficult material!! (HAHA, not like I can really talk, though. I'm constantly distracted from my studies because of HP fic.)

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!! ^_^

[i_introduce_me]

Wheeee! Is this exclamation inappropriate for the depressing brilliance that this ficlet is?

[theleapingmuse]

No way. You can Wheeeeee! all you want, lovie. *g*

:D

[i_introduce_me]

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

*breathes in*

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

[inocciduous]

O, I think you just killed me, chickadee. Killed me dead, in fact :)

Aside from the nitpicks I already gave you, this is so good. And dreame_waever is right, this is very different from most R/Hr pieces. I think you enjoy teh ebol far too much, my dear. :)

[theleapingmuse]

*revives you with chocolate and lots of pron*

If you die, I'm really screwed. *g*

I <3 you for your nitpicks! Hurrah. And, I didn't know you read any Hr/R. I learn something new about you everyday! I suppose it's different because it's not really fluff- it's Teh Dark Stuff. (Sekretly, I loff dark fics. They make my world go 'round. But we'll just keep that as well as my loff for EVOL!!!1! on the down low. *g*)

[lilpinksmooch13]

oh. my. gosh.

that was wonderful. and heart-wrenching.

and it would make the best music video ever. LOL

wow...just, wow.

simply, utterly, without a doubt, fantastic. *dies*

[lilpinksmooch13]

AND, i had just finsished watching the "Wake Me Up When September Ends" video. LOL.

[theleapingmuse]

*brings you back to life with lots of chocolate*

If this fic were a music video, I think *I* would die. O_O

Thanks so much for reading!!

[lilpinksmooch13]

LOL