Lament for a Daemon's Soul [Chapter Twenty-Two]

[thelastpen]

Title: Lament for a Daemon’s Soul
Author: Sio
Rating: At least R for violence.
Length: 54278 / ?
Spoilers: This is AU, but Season 1 spoilers are possible starting with chapter 6.
Summary: Rachel is a member of an immortal altered race of humans that call themselves the Vanpyr and live in secret alongside normal humans. Murdered years earlier

Comments

[docebarbara]

more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I get sad when the chapter is over!

[thelastpen]

Glad you're enjoying it. I'm writing pretty quick lately, so there may be a new chapter come tomorrow.

[anonymous]

Oh that was so touching. So glad she knows its Rachel. Loving this story.

[thelastpen]

Glad you're enjoying it. :3

[sometimescathy]

Crying into my wheaties right about now. That was such a bittersweet ending, it was beautiful. To be quite honest, everything that happened in this chapter was perfect. From the way Puck left silently to the way Quinn stopped Rachel from leaving. It was very touching. Wonderful job! This is by far my most favorite chapter.

[thelastpen]

Yeah, that's why this scene had to be the only one in the chapter. Anything else would have just diluted it I think.

I'm really glad you liked it. Unfortunately... they're still only friends at best now. Yeah, I'm mean, just getting to friends took better than 50K words. I do plan on Faberry endgame though! It's just takes a while to build from that place of "we're enemies" to love... or at least acceptance of love.

[winstonta]

I'm continually impressed with how you're developing this series. First off, I agree with your decision to make this scene the only scene for the chapter. There was so much going on, so many important elements, and bookending that with Quinn leaving the Fabray household or Quinn retreating to the Hudson's would have taken away from the raw emotion in this chapter.

As much as I like Mark Salling's portrayal of Puck, this series just makes him a thousand times more likable and almost relatable in how he masks his emotions by keeping people away. Also, considering how the show was butchered Rachel's personality, I adore how you continue to add depth to her. I'm so excited that you are so motivated to write, so I will continue to check regularly for updates. Keep up the great work :D

[thelastpen]

Well, I figure I'm somewhere around half done at this point. Somewhere around there anyway. As far as the the canon timeline, I'm in the area of Hairography. (I tend to gloss over scenes and subplots that make no sense storywise or I just really dislike, so I think I'll only be hijacking maybe one scene from that ep.) >_

[winstonta]

Whenever I'm home from work/not doing grad school assignments, I keep checking your main page every few hours to see if you've updated. Which is kinda awkward/funny for me, it's almost like I'm stalking your LJ page, but not really cause it's for an awesome story I really like... *feels weird anyway* lol

[thelastpen]

Just been a bit distracted lately, C23's first scene isn't smoothing out the way I want, so I've been spending more time than usual on it. ... and maybe channeling drunk!Rachel in an RP isn't the most conducive to make it work right I want to keep this scene though - it's Quinn getting to live one of the little fantasies she had watching Rachel and Puck before. Bit longer I'm afraid.

And I wouldn't worry about LJ stalking, it's very common for writing journals I hear. XD

[thatissodawn]

Oh...poor Noah. Always second choice or sometimes even not a choice because he isn't even considered. So sad.

Great addition, the ending was so amazing.

[thelastpen]

Yeah, Noah does tend to get a bum rap. Poor guy. Maybe San and Britt will take pity on him and offer a threesome? Maybe, maybe not, but if they do I won't be writing it. That would be such a bad idea. >_>;;;