Hey, guys! The work in progress title for this is Squad, hence the name of the post.
Here's the edited version of the first scene, and the unedited second and third. The second is very short, and mostly silent, actually, so I put on the third for fun. Keep in mind that scene three depends heavily on Ted's detachement. When he makes comments like, '
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*giggles, snorts*
Props to you for quoting Princess Bride. And I see you've introduced us to the smuggling in the first scene. Yay for exposition! I like that there are actually stakes, what with Laura's father being missing. Very nice.
whispers, "I do not think that word means what you think it means."
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*offers around cookies*
Yeah, I've been heavy on the PB references lately - I'm working on an animation with some friends, in which one character fights a giant rat, and we're using the ROUS line. The girl who voices her says that line really well...
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