You Won't Be Mine (Chapter Seven)

[thelastchickpea]

Title: You Won't Be Mine (Chapter 7)
Author: thelastchickpea
Pairing: Spike/Angel, Bartleby/Loki (from Dogma), Spike/Bartleby
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: See AN. Slash (m/m sex), angst, crossover with Dogma
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, background story, or title. It's not for profit so please don't sue.
Spoilers: Post-NFA (so all AtS to be safe)

Comments

[thelastchickpea]

Yup, battle gear time indeed!

Glad you liked the convo. Angel's getting a little better though, yeah?

Haha, if you like Spike and Bartleby but are rooting for Angel, than I'm happy because the fic is doing it's job :)

Thank you!

[thelastchickpea]

Thank you! And the poster looks really great; the red fireworks work well with the whole danger thing now *g*

[thelastchickpea]

Love it :)

[lilithbint]

this is so much fun,
I love Spike with Bartleby and I love that Angel is beginning to figure it out.
Can't wait for Loki to join the fun.

[thelastchickpea]

Oh yes, the fun is just beginning...

Thank you so much, sweets!

[zoesmith]

Oh!! Oh!!!! Bartleby gave up Heaven for Spike…. Wow!! And OMG big fight!! Whoa!! I loved the chapter so so much honey!! I honestly can’t wait for more!!

I love every word of the phone conversation between Angel and Spike. Fantastic voices honey! Fantastic. Angel is so adorably clueless! And it’s so nice to see them been friends. I love that.
Also, Angel has a grammar fetish….? *giggles* of course… that explains so many things! ;)

“And if I could have a son, I imagine he’d be like you. Smart, stubborn, except he’d be a bit handsomer…”
I LOVE Metatron so much! Can’t get enough of him! Lol

*huggles* xxx

[thelastchickpea]

Glad you liked it! Yeah, Bartleby is a little unhappy with TPTB's rules, both for angels and demons *headdesk for cliche*

I always love hearing that people think the voices were good, makes me feel better about the huge chunks of dialogue. Thank you!
Haha, well, Angel seems to have a bit of a discipline fetish in general. I'm sure some schoolboy-teacher games could come into play *g*

Metatron's awesome. I feel like he's sort of the Giles equivalent for Bartleby in a way.

Thank you for the lovely comment!

[adso_von_melk]

wow...bad things are gonna happen! *grins*

[thelastchickpea]

Yup, it's going to get tricky for our heroes...

Thank you!