Fic: That Which Held Me Is Now Gone; PG-13

[theladyfeylene]

This is another one from the Jack Kerouac School of Writing. Forgive me for anything that seems ridiculously bizarre or surreal

Comments

[rosehiptea]

I like it. Henry's attitude that he could win, that he won. I especially liked what Frank said about Richard Braintree. I usually portray Braintree as the bane of Frank's existence but I can see him saying that he was "one of us."

Well done.

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you! It was one of those weird, random little ideas that hit me late at night in the throes of inebriation, and...I wrote it. I kind of went with the idea of 'well, none of us liked Braintree, but we didn't really wish him dead, only most of us have probably thought 'I wish you'd drop dead' at least once, and now he is, and it was an awful way to die, so....'. It was kind of inspired, again by you, by what you said about 'Ashfield Heights People'. They really are kind of... a community unto themselves.

Thank you again! I was...terribly nervous writing Frank!