Fic: Blood and Justice, Xover; Naomi/Scar; NC-17

Sep 09, 2007 23:43

THE OTHER FIC I SAID I WOULD FINISH YESTERDAY! Also, go read the comment fic t3h_toby_chan wrote me for this same pairing, it is amazing ( Read more... )

death note, fic, crossover, fma

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theladyfeylene September 10 2007, 07:09:15 UTC
YAY I AM GLAD IT WAS AWESOME! And if I was at all capable of taking another large scale fic, I would so try but I have too many...

Scar kicks Raye's ass from Japan to Central City and back. Naomi's so much better off with him. He wouldn't keep her in the kitchen making pies and babies! He'd probably get off on her shooting bad guys....

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viola_canina September 10 2007, 07:22:32 UTC
Wow, I don't even know too much about Fullmetal Alchemist, but this is really interesting and unique. Really... fresh.

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theladyfeylene September 10 2007, 07:28:32 UTC
FMA is awesome and dark and twisted and full of morally ambiguous characters and doom and....yes. One of my favorite series. Thank you! It was a random little thing that wouldn't leave me alone. :D

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viola_canina September 10 2007, 07:39:23 UTC
Yeah, I really want to watch Fullmetal Alchemist. I know that there are some major differences between the manga and the anime... which version do you prefer?

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theladyfeylene September 10 2007, 18:42:44 UTC
I prefer the anime. My favorite characters are more prominent in the anime, and I just really enjoy all the moral dilemmas in the anime, and how all the characters are neither good or evil, they fall somewhere between. The manga is much more clear cut on who's a 'good guy' and who's a 'bad guy'. Also, the manga is massively long and still going while the anime is only 51 episodes and has been finished for a while. :D

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theladyfeylene September 10 2007, 07:28:55 UTC
MY MUSE IS IN OVERDRIVE, EMI!

THANK YOU!

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t3h_toby_chan September 10 2007, 18:44:04 UTC
I still see problems in their motives, because Kira is basically with the same intent- to kill criminals that haven't had proper retribution. He doesn't do the 'killing innocents' thing. :[ When Naomi supposes that Scar has a "Kira inside of him", I don't see that as the Military being his Kira, but instead, himself being a Kira of his own, just as Naomi too has become, whether she likes it or not.

Baw, I sound like I'm here to criticize, which is silly for random crossover cracky angst porn.

But! *nitpicks*

had little problems

'Had few problems'. Or possibly 'had little problem'. I think that's gramatically correct. .-.

I also have to wonder what happened to the children cowering behind the dumpster. You'd think Scar would want to speak to them and at least make sure they were alright.

Rrrm, yez. Anyway. Hawt.

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theladyfeylene September 10 2007, 18:49:36 UTC
Yeah this is... pretty much just shiny hot pr0n, and I'll readily admit I didn't put much effort into characterization beyond the basic. Sometimes I do write senseless PWP! :D

And it's never going to be posted anywhere but here, so... yes. BUT THANK YOU!

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t3h_toby_chan September 10 2007, 19:20:00 UTC
Yes, that's just my editor-brain not wanting to be turned off. :B

LURB YOU!

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anat_astarte September 11 2007, 02:26:35 UTC
Oh wow! I don't know anything about Death Note, but this is a great fic!
I loveeeeeeee how you write Scar <3

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