Everything's Made To Be Broken - RPGverse Fic

[theladyfeylene]

No, I have not forgotten about the requests I took! I did the easy ones, now I'm moving onto the hard ones. And you guys gave me some challenging ones! ;)

This one takes some explaining. It's basically an AU fic for the RP I'm always going on about, landels_redux. AU because, well, this would never, ever happen in game. For those of you not familiar with

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[chaneystarr]

Eeeee! That makes me squeeful! And Sunshine was touchy! *pleased by this* Ha, that's was brilliant, as always. :D Although I can see how those two would be difficult about it *snickers*

[theladyfeylene]

Yay! Hahahah, yes! And there was precedent for it, since in the current Scar and Hughes thread, Scar put a hand on Hughes' shoulder. They're totally bonding! ;) Thank you! Yeah, both were very, very grumpy about it. Hughes is demanding I write some Hughes/Roy/Gracia smut now, to appease him! ;)

[chaneystarr]

Hahaha, awww. That's so cute. In a very grumbly manner, of course. *loves on them*

[theladyfeylene]

They are so strangly cute in their weird way. Hughes is convinced he can make a friend of Scar. And he's not going to give up. Even when Scar like, attacks him.

[momoiro_usagi]

OMG! Landels fandom is so much love! <3

I always forget that you're Hughes, for some reason, but you really write him well and I'm looking forward to any interaction he might have with Dante! ^^ I love the parallels you draw between Scar and Hughes in this piece, and the way you bring out the tension in their relationship. Everything about it feels so real and convincing! ^^ Nice job!

[theladyfeylene]

Heeee, yes!

Ha, yes, I am Hughes! I am way more identified with Lust, I've noticed, since I played her longer and she seems to interact with more people than Hughes does. And I do hope Hughes and Dante get to meet each other! Thank you! They have a weird, weird quasi-friendship ICly, with Hughes bound and determined to make a friend of Scar.

[momoiro_usagi]

Ha ha ha...well, actually...I tend to associate you with Lust in all your writing! ^_^ It's not that you don't write other characters well or anything, but you really bring her to life! It makes me wonder if you really are Lust, lol! Is there something you aren't telling me?

[theladyfeylene]

That tends to happen. I'll be associated with one or two characters specifically. In FMA it seems to be Lust and Ed, and back in HP it was Snape and Remus. There are certain characters I just click with, writing wise.

The world may never know... ;)

[lacidiana]

Eeeeeeeee. :DDDD

I'm so happy you did this! Sorry they gave you such a hard time. XD; Yeah, when I RP Scar, I tend to bring him to bridges through which he can gain advantages at Landel's and he proceeds to BURN THEM ALL. CRAZE-O. >O

Anyway, yeeee. :DDD It's so awesome to read Landel'sdom stuff, and although they're likely to never do anything like that, it certainly brings me fuzzy thoughts. <333

THANK YOU! ^_^

[theladyfeylene]

YAY! Eh, I'll make it up to them. ;) Scar so crazy! He just needs to take some classes on Making Friends! *snickers*

Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it! It sort of took on a life of it's own, and I was nervous as all hell because this is the biggest RPG fic I've ever written. I love how I'm all 'yeah, I will do drabbles and little ficlets... HERE HAVE OVER TWO THOUSAND WORDS!'. :D

You're welcome!

[burningvigor]

Awesome work. :D This fic made me feel all guilty, though. Roy's so inconsiderate sometimes! All the time. But yeah, he is sort of doing it for their own good, since people would get suspicious if he didn't flirt his cute little butt off.

But you made this rather believable. It was a nice tough to include the shoulder thing, since I remembered that from the current thread you guys are doing. <3 Great job as always, Fey!

[theladyfeylene]

Yay! Thank you! Aw, don't feel guilty! Roy is doing the right thing, even if Hughes can't see it that way. He's just grumbly. ;)

Thank you! That was the hardest part. Making these two, in this situation, believably engaging in any sort of romantic/physical activity is damn hard to make believable. Yes! Yay for awkward and confused touching! I am glad you enjoyed!

[_acerbitas_]

Oh God, like, that was awesome. I love how you make things work out between such unlikely characters. Poor Hughes, I bet Gracia isn't there. :( That was perfect. Oh, circumstances make such impossible things so possible. And you wrote Scar in a relationship so well! It's so hard to comprehend Scar in a relationship with anybody, considering he's like...I don't know...erm...hopefully you know what I mean. But the way you did it, it was perfect. Wow. You know I adore your stories!

In a side note, poor Roy. His brain is probably hurting really bad right now.

[theladyfeylene]

Thank you! It was a damn difficult prompt, but luckily Hughes and Scar have a friendship of sorts in the RPG to draw on. And no, Gracia's not there. But he writes to her every night, even if he can't send her the letters. Thank you! A ot of that goes to lacidiana, who plays Scar in the game. And he is very un-relationshipy. :D Thank you!

Yes, I bet he is. :D

[_acerbitas_]

Oh my God, that is the cutest thing ever! *melts* I can just see him writing them now... Hughes is so adorable!

I bet it was, but you pulled it off right swell!