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thekeyholder

But where's your heart? Part 2.

Sep 14, 2010 12:52

Title: But where's your heart? Part 2. (mini-series)
Author: thekeyholder (Brigi)
Pairing: Belldom
Summary: Based on the following prompt on mkmeme : "teen!Matt meets teen!Dom at a *insert emo band here* show. They are both wearing girl jeans and eyeliner."
I'm so glad that I decided to write this, it was a challenge! Had the whole story settled in my head but ( Read more... )

[type] fluff, fanfiction, slash, [length] mini-series, [era] teen muse, muse, [fic] mkmeme, [type] au, [mini-series] but where's your heart?, [type] friendship, [type] h/c, [type] first time, [pairing] belldom

Comments 32

starlight_myth September 14 2010, 10:32:45 UTC

EEEEEEEEEE!!!!!
You updated!!!

*runs to read*
I'll be back!

thekeyholder September 14 2010, 12:47:40 UTC

:D:D

EEEEEEE!
You commented! LOL!

starlight_myth September 14 2010, 11:08:47 UTC

OMG!!!
SO SO SO SO CUUUUTEEE!!!

So that was Sandy's idea. Nice ;)
And the boys talking about their hair and straighteners....LOL!

Awww aren't they bonding! They gel so well together. And picture...WOW!
I am the first man to take a photo of an angel. If I would die now, I would be happy.
Gaahhhh so adorable!

Matt's panic attack was sad. But Dom will make him see the light.

Sleep over?! Ahem ahem....can't wait to see how that goes!

But when Matt’s eyes met with Dom’s shiny orbs, he knew that everything around him was real. He was anchored in reality even though it was more beautiful than any of his dreams.
*sighs happily* Loved this!!!
*hugs*

thekeyholder September 14 2010, 12:56:11 UTC

*grins like a loony*

They are emo guys, of course hair is an important topic! xD Ahhh, I'm so happy you liked this part! They definitely get along very well, Matt finally found somebody who wants to protect him. :)

Sleep over?! Ahem ahem....can't wait to see how that goes!

Hehe :D >:) I'm not sure yet how this will go...

Thank you for quoting the parts you liked, and for your nice comment in general! ;)

farawisa September 14 2010, 12:28:09 UTC

one of my first thoughts when i read their conversations was omg, they're flirting, and really really oblivious about it.

so cute. thanks for sharing. update soon please.

thekeyholder September 14 2010, 13:01:10 UTC

one of my first thoughts when i read their conversations was omg, they're flirting, and really really oblivious about it.

Yeeees, they were flirting but quite subtly, don't you think? :) Thanks for your comment! *hugs*

starlight_myth September 14 2010, 13:04:21 UTC

They were definitely flirting!
Especially Dom :D

thekeyholder September 14 2010, 21:08:39 UTC

He's more sociable, after all that suffering Matt doesn't trust people, you know? :)

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Re: But where's your heart? Part 2. thekeyholder September 14 2010, 19:25:10 UTC

AAAAAAAAAAA!

Thank you bb for your comment! ;)

millionstar September 14 2010, 15:43:41 UTC

They're just so damned happy and full of energy I can't even stand it. This is adorable, can't wait for more!

thekeyholder September 14 2010, 19:26:52 UTC

:D:D:D Thank you so much, your comment made me giggle!<3

*dances happily*