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mkatieultra March 15 2012, 16:27:56 UTC
*Sings:* Love love love!

I really love this! So much! It's interesting, intriguing. Can't wait for more. <333

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thekeyholder March 18 2012, 12:59:00 UTC
Aww, thanks, Katie! :) I'm really glad to hear that! <3 I don't know what will happen next, so yo might have to wait a bit for an update.

<3

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laurad2609 March 15 2012, 20:43:25 UTC
Look who posted! Man, I just want them to meet and hug and share a cute moment! :) Great chapter! I loved the tarot card thing and the dandelions! I used to hate them because this guy always threw those seed-stuff at me and choked me :)) But now you made me like them again! Seriously, post more often! *hugs* (And I hope you arrived home safe from the creepy train)

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thekeyholder March 18 2012, 13:00:56 UTC
I miss posting and writing a lot. :/ Stupid uni!

Aww, man, sorry to hear about your unpleasant memory with dandelions! They are s pretty, as those seeds float in the air...Thank you for helping me out with this chapter! Sometimes there's a huge mess in my head and you helped me to make order! :)

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muse_manticore March 15 2012, 22:39:21 UTC
YAY you updated. :D

I love these two. I'm so glad Dom was able to cheer Matt up, he needed that.

*snuggles*

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thekeyholder March 18 2012, 13:01:47 UTC
Thanks, Carla! :D

I'm so glad you stillenjoy this story! I think 2 more parts and we're done.

*hugs*

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muse_manticore March 18 2012, 15:43:33 UTC
OMG really? Only 2 more bits? ... oh my fuck!

*snuggles*

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eskarlata March 16 2012, 02:32:37 UTC
Poor Matthew, he needs a friend. Or more than a friend, but...someone at least. He´s such a lonely person. I also noticed that he´s changed a lot. He seemed much more...pragmatic at the beginning, and now he´s quite sensitive, quality that Dom used to own at first, more than him.

It´s good to know how they saw each other for the first time. But you´re being cruel with them (and us), let them meet at last! xD

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thekeyholder March 18 2012, 13:05:44 UTC
Poor Matthew, he needs a friend. Or more than a friend, but...someone at least.

He certainly does and I have a feeling that he will meet soon somebody (in person too!).

He seemed much more...pragmatic at the beginning, and now he´s quite sensitive, quality that Dom used to own at first, more than him.

Very fine observation - that's exactly what happened! I'd call it Dom's influence on Matt. ;)

I still need to write the final dream (based on the elemenet fire) which will give them the clue. Two more parts, I think. :) I hope that's good news?

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eskarlata March 18 2012, 18:46:40 UTC
Oh, 2 more parts? D: Interesting. And yes, that´s good news :)

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stefanyeah March 16 2012, 02:34:51 UTC
Aaaaaah! At least Matt knows where he has seen Dom now! He could easily get his name and contact details now! *excited*

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thekeyholder March 18 2012, 13:08:32 UTC
Hehehehe, you are very right. I don't want to reveal much, but Matt might not appeal to modern technology. :))

Thanks for still following the story, Stef! :D

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stefanyeah March 19 2012, 23:31:09 UTC
But he has his colleague and that guy can give him a name and addresses. Really old school on paper and point at phone books. :P

Course. I wanna see them meet in the end.

And have filthy sex. And share many sweet cuddles.

Edit: Why does the striking out not work? The filthy sex part was meant to be striked out. *sulks*

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thekeyholder March 23 2012, 15:21:19 UTC
Haha, I can't say more. I haven't exactly planned this yet though, because I'm working on another fantasy story which is easier to write.

LOL in my inbox, the filthy sex part was crossed out, but it isn't here! O.o How weird is that?!

But anyway, I'm afraid I won't describe anything dirty in this story. :P I think it's better if this remains a 'pure' story.

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