Fic: Sounds Like

Dec 03, 2007 03:11

Title: Sounds Like
Gabe/Patrick; NC-17 (Yay me!); ~10,500 words *facepalm*
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patrick, fic, gabelove

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keenoled December 3 2007, 12:52:31 UTC
Overload! Overload! *brainmeltdown*

And on top of that SO frigging sweet.
Huh? If we'd like this to be a multi-chapter fic with all the rest of the bands guest-starring and like a relationship story and stuff? Why, yes, wouldn't mind that one bit. :)
Or at least a coda with a scene from the next day with Patrick showing up in dirty jeans and one of Gabe's shirts... :D

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thejumpcut December 3 2007, 17:10:34 UTC
Oh, dude, that's tempting. I'm usually all about the antics and the cameos and the snappy dialogue, and... okay, maybe eventually I'll carry on with it a bit, but *whines* plot! I *hate* plot!

I love that I melted your brain, though. Hooray!

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xsnarkasaurus December 3 2007, 17:27:18 UTC
i could so support that sort of thing...please? preeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey please? with sugar and whipped cream and Gabe and Patrick on top?

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thejumpcut December 3 2007, 17:40:29 UTC
Excuse me, I have to go ruminate at length about the "sugar and whipped cream and Gabe and Patrick on top" thing there. WOW. *blinks*

Um. I stand firm by my original answer of "maybe"? Which is to say "pretty likely but it might take me, like, six months, so I don't want to promise anything"?

But. I demand you elaborate on this "sugar and whipped cream and Gabe and Patrick on top" business! *flails uselessly* !!!

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wildestranger December 3 2007, 13:43:44 UTC
Most delightful. :)

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thejumpcut December 3 2007, 17:11:05 UTC
Thank you, it's most delightful that you enjoyed it, also!

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jaygoose December 3 2007, 15:25:32 UTC
*squeaks incoherently* Oh. Wow. I... Wow.

*clears throat* Okay, so this pleased me greatly. For serious. I absolutely adore Patrick and Gabe separately but together its just fucking bananas. This was amazing. And I loved that even though they are both clearly mind meltingly hot they still seem to have their own insecurities. Especially Gabe. He was just freaking ten kinds of adorable there... multiple times. Ha!

Thank you for this. Really.

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thejumpcut December 3 2007, 17:20:24 UTC
No, no, thank *you*! Your icon ftw!

I'm glad Gabe came off as insecure and not too skeezy or too obnoxious, and that they were not total caricatures. I feel like these two deserved better than that once I finally managed to get them alone!

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thesamefire December 3 2007, 16:21:35 UTC
hi, you broke my brain. like, for reals. it's all over.

(i will maybe leave some real feedback later, when i am not desperately cramming for a final because i accidentally spent most of yesterday working on a fic instead of studying. whoops!)

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thejumpcut December 3 2007, 17:31:35 UTC
HI AU ME! Please to be putting your brain back together! *gathers pieces in a bag and shooes you gently back towards your studying* You need it for 1) being brilliant and 2) YES! WRITING MORE FIC!

And I love all feedback, but really, "broke my brain" is a totally awesome start. Even if I didn't mean to *winces*

AND AND AND, are we going to watch Spinal Tap? We can *do* this, let's find a day!!

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thesamefire December 3 2007, 20:59:32 UTC
it was the best possible kind of brain-breaking, though!

oh man, that final was brutal. and the brutal was all the prof asking stupid questions, and only in very small amounts my ridiculous lack of studying. anyway, it's overrrrrrrr!

this syntax term paper, on the other hand, is going to kill me dead. askdgjasdkgasdg. so yeah, spinal tap! any time between this saturday and like the 19th should be fine, except the night of the 12th. pick a date and i will probably be able to make it!

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thejumpcut December 3 2007, 22:13:55 UTC
*wince* oh, gross, I'm sorry you had to sit through it, but HOORAY it's done! <--*points to icon* Go you!

Ergh. [[Good luck] with [the [Syntax [Paper [Of Doom]]]]]. *Phew* It has been a long time since I even ATTEMPTED that, as you can probably tell by HOW I REFUSE TO EVEN TRY TO LABEL ANYTHING YIKES!

I say Friday the 14th: OK for you? It's all up on the "I Can *So* Organize A Social Function, It Just Has To Be For Something I Actually *Want* To Do" post.

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sullenriot19 December 3 2007, 16:28:39 UTC
Yeah, so this is pretty fucking awesome. I love it a LOT. Gabe and Patrick are like...so lewd and precious together.

...a few sequels to this story perhaps? Starting with once the boys get to Gabe's apartment? Just saying.

Great job. <3

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thejumpcut December 3 2007, 17:26:07 UTC
Thank you so much! Oh, dude, "lewd and precious" is totally my new favorite phrase. That's fucking wicked.

I thought about starting another one, but since I'm incapable of keeping anything short, it's kind of a massive undertaking and I'm not sure I could do it justice - plus, I totally need a break. But if it starts eating my brain, I promise I'll write it, OK? I won't hold out on you!

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