[APH] What time is it?

[thejmprod]

Title: What time is it? (Adventures on the couch Time!)
Category: Axis Powers Hetalia / Hetalia World Series
Characters/Pairings: Greece & Japan being dorky
Genre/Rating/Warnings: humor/G/mostly dialogue only interaction

Summary/Excerpt: Herakles and Kiku spend an entire day on the couch. Their minds, however, don't.

A/N: For the giripan holiday

Comments

[charlzway]

Omg Adventure Time, this is so effin' cute. I can't even begin to quote which lines were my favourite - they are all lulzy! xD

Love it when these two play children's games together like that, lol.

[disownmereturns]

Haha tbh, I've only seen one or two episodes of Adventure Time ^^; but yep, these two have dorky fun sometimes :D Thanks for the comment! :'3

[chromatic_coma]

...THIS IS SO AMAZING. Oh god, I was giggling all over the place from this, hun! This fic is really adorable and I love the wild imaginations they both have. Especially with Kiku, I didn't know he was going to get so into it but it was perfect when he did. This has me smiling so much, you don't even know. Thank you!!

[disownmereturns]

Heeee ♥ >///< I'm really glad you liked it :D Hope you had a wonderful birthday! *hugs*

[chromatic_coma]

I am having a great one, yes. Thank you again so so much!

[digi_smile]

The two of them being dorks together should not be so friggen adorable but it is, i just wanna squeesh them. I love Adventure Time!!!! it's so unbelievably cracktastik it's awesome.

[disownmereturns]

Haha! :D Thanks for the comment! :)

[marieciel]

This is SO adorable!! Can't even put my feelings into proper coherent words. I'm flailing all over the place from the vast overloads of cute. >w<
You are a genius for writing this. ^^ Wonderful, wonderful job!!

[disownmereturns]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

[rose_fortress]

Hee. They sound like children in here. Not that that's necessarily a bad thing; it shows how they can make each other feel young and lively in spite of one of them being over 2000 years old.

Although I can't help but think that the dialogue was OOC for Japan...even with Greece, I don't think Japan would act like this without some strong persuasion. I was half-expecting a scene where Greece gently coaxed Japan into roleplaying along with him and not worrying about how silly he might sound. But maybe it's just because I'm reading this after another day of cramming for my exams? It might make more sense when I reread it at a later date.

[disownmereturns]

Although I can't help but think that the dialogue was OOC for Japan...even with Greece

/is so very amused
Somehow I knew you'd say this, or if not, then someone would comment about it and yeah, the thought crossed my mind X'DD

Earlier today I was trying to see if the dialogue still worked if you slapped on another pair of nations, but LOL I dunno ^^; recently, my image of Japan is changing and I can't write him quite right yet

But thanks for the comment! :D

[rose_fortress]

...You knew I'd say this? Have I gained a reputation to criticize other people's works or something?

I was just trying to give a bit of concrit, honest, and I was kind of fatigued from exam studying too. Upon rereading, I can see that Japan's initial hesitation is actually shown a little bit at the beginning when he doesn't seem quite sure of how to respond to Greece's statements and he seems to have gotten into the acting flow in the following parts.

I still think that it could have been fleshed out more, though, and that the dialogue-only aspect may have detracted from that. Not that your fic's bad by a long shot; it's very nice and original, but I do like giving concrit, so...

Yeah, I'll just slip away now to study more.

[disownmereturns]

Ahaha sorry, I didn't mean anything by it ^^; It's that you've always struck me as a serious sort of person when you leave comments and I enjoy your concrit. They really help :D

I'll admit tho I was pressed for time writing this because of thesis and the dialogue was an easy way out X'DD

Good luck with exams!