[APH] there's a warm wind blowing the stars around

Aug 04, 2011 23:30

Title: there's a warm wind blowing the stars around
Category: Axis Powers Hetalia / Hetalia World Series
Characters/Pairings: Japan, Greece
Genre/Rating/Warnings: general/G/AU, a story not about themselves?

Summary/Excerpt: Kiku is a mangaka and Herakles is a novelist. They're both stuck in an artistic rut and help each other out ( Read more... )

fandom: hetalia, char: greece, universe: alternate, char: japan, ! oneshot, genre: general

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songofbreaking August 4 2011, 18:14:37 UTC
this story was... wow. it had sort of a magical feel to it for some reason. I don't know. have you ever had one of those moments when you lock eyes with a stranger for a few seconds and then feel somewhat of a need to get to know them better but you can't act upon it? that's what this story's like except they acted upon the urge to get to know each other. what I'm wondering is if they'll ever talk to each other again after this night? marvelous job!

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disownmereturns August 7 2011, 13:46:34 UTC
Haha! :D I've never had that moment but I'd like to imagine other people do? X'DD And I'm pretty sure they'll talk to each other again after this night. More than talking acutally~ *le wink*

Thank you! :'D

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charlzway August 5 2011, 00:33:14 UTC
You wrote Giripan! \o\ /o/

Aaaahhhhh there are so many things I love about this short fic! It's so... so.. it's sweet, it's adorakable (Greece you write BL! XD), it's dreamy, it's so them. And omg, writer's/artist's block. That totally drew me into the story and I can relate to it so, so much like now orz.

In short, you write amazing Giripan (as always) and you're awesome. Also, happy birthday! :D

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disownmereturns August 7 2011, 13:49:05 UTC
I diiiid~ After so long! |||OTL

Greece likes to write down his fantasies and get book awards for them /shot And thank youuuuu so much! :'D

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rose_fortress August 5 2011, 03:58:45 UTC
Happy birthday!

You have a true talent for working in little details that create a vivid image of the setting. I smiled at how dorky Herakles and Kiku were together and how they began completing each other's sentences after only a few minutes as if they had known each other or were just waiting to meet each other all their lives. It was so cliched and yet it felt so right at the same time.

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disownmereturns August 7 2011, 13:52:50 UTC
Aaaah thank you so much! >///< And thank you for the birthday greet! :')

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cattiechaos August 5 2011, 08:50:47 UTC
Oh my God, this is so cute! XD; I can't believe that Kiku actually had the nerves to initiate a conversation with someone - but I'm glad he did, because this would have been a totally tragic missed connection if he had stayed quiet. I wish I had someone to banter with like this, it sounds so creatively stimulating that writer's block goes out the window. One point of critique that I'd like to mention is that it's hard for me to believe Kiku saying something like "Come off it" - it's so very Western, and moreover a phrase that is usually tied to Arthur/England, that it interrupted the idyllic flow of the narrative just a tad. Other than that, it was a nice read, so thank you for writing. Also, happy birthday! I hope you have/had a great day. Many happy returns!

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disownmereturns August 7 2011, 13:57:50 UTC
Thank you! :) I'd like someone to banter with too. Life would be hella enjoyable X'DD

"Come off it" - it's so very Western, and moreover a phrase that is usually tied to Arthur/England

Aha ^^; That crossed my mind while I was writing this. Their conversation was happening in Japanese in my head and I was looking for an English equivalent of his statement that wasn't "Pshaw" or "Nawww" but thinking about it now, there's plenty of other options ^^; Here's to me being lazy orz

And thank you for the birthday greet! :D

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cattiechaos August 8 2011, 02:10:37 UTC
Bantering is probably good creative stimulus XD For some reason all the friends that I've met from Hetalia no longer write for the series *cough* XD

Now, that's an interesting notion of the conversation taking place in Japanese. I'd love to know what causes Heracles into taking an interest in Japan and the language. No worries, we are all susceptible to laziness at times! :Db

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measuringlife August 6 2011, 11:34:46 UTC
Awww, this was adorable! I really love when they were brainstorming together~ I laughed out loud (literally) at the crazy-cute manga plots they were coming up with. Good job~ ♥

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disownmereturns August 7 2011, 13:58:20 UTC
Eeee~ ♥ Thank you so much! :"3

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