[APH] Falling Without Knowing (two)

Feb 11, 2011 01:40

Title: Falling Without Knowing
Category: Axis Powers Hetalia / Hetalia World Series
Characters/Pairings: Greece/Japan, others mentioned
Genre/Rating/Warnings: romance, drama, sci-fi/PG/post apocalyptic space opera, switching between country and human names

Summary/Excerpt: The nations are living in their own planets, united under one galaxy. By ( Read more... )

fandom: hetalia, pairing: greece/japan, universe: alternate, genre: romance, genre: drama, verse: falling without knowing, char: greece, char: japan, genre: sci-fi

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curlee1029 February 11 2011, 00:10:06 UTC
This is really awesome. Please write more!!!

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disownmereturns February 11 2011, 14:43:09 UTC
Thank you! :) I will o7

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chromatic_coma February 11 2011, 00:28:56 UTC
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee still so awesome! I was actually going to ask if you were inspired by the FST because I downloaded it a month ago, about, and it's basically the best FST I ever heard and fits them so well (and the song Falling Without Knowing is on it, too).

My favorite part has to be how you turned the strip where they had sex (?) into a passage of the fic; it felt so natural and it was a really nice thing to say, "hey, there's that!" :)

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disownmereturns February 11 2011, 14:45:18 UTC
Yes I diiiid :'3 I fell in love with the songs the instant I heard them. Just ♥♥♥

sex (?)

(?) indeed hurrhurr! >///< Thank you! :'33

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chromatic_coma February 11 2011, 16:57:23 UTC
>W< YES! ♥♥♥

Because, you know, it was just a dream just keep telling yourself that, Japan.

You're welcome!

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charlzway February 11 2011, 04:04:42 UTC
I've said it before, but I'll say it again. This. Is. Awesome~ ♥ !

I really love your portrayal of Herakles, and how frustrated he was by the memories, I love how you included that strip in too, and you did it so effortlessly too! It's like I could see how in each Butterfly-memory, Greece and Japan grew closeer in their own way.

And omg, I love Corporal Cat! "Your violets died." LOL.

Please, please, please write more! /fanspazzes

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disownmereturns February 11 2011, 14:46:08 UTC
Eeee~ thank you for comment! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it O/

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seena58 February 11 2011, 13:33:29 UTC
I really enjoyed reading this. Just... the pacing of the entire chapter, the interactions and memories and how they were formatted and how it ended... I can't wait to see what's next.

And Corporal Cat is just awesome. That's all I can think now.

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disownmereturns February 11 2011, 14:47:11 UTC
and how they were formatted

Teehee~ I'm having fun formatting my fics. Can't do that at ff.net o 3o

djkghjkdfhgf >///< Thank you for the comment bby /O/

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rose_fortress February 12 2011, 16:59:52 UTC
I have nothing else to say here but join the other reviewers in telling you how awesome this chapter is and how great your characterization of Greece is. I felt my heart jump along with Greece's when I saw the "herakles san" on my screen.

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disownmereturns February 13 2011, 09:33:37 UTC
Yay! /O/ Thank you so much for the comment! :'33

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