Comments | their_white_day: (ART) Until Tomorrow for Chaos Harmony by Your Secret Admirer

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(ART) Until Tomorrow for Chaos Harmony by Your Secret Admirer

Mar 31, 2007 11:21

For: Chaos_Harmony
By: gray-queen
Title: Until Tomorrow
Pairing: Tezuka/Fuji
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Not mine, of course ;)
A/N: Ahh...The coloring turned out horribly. Chaos_harmony, you didn't have a prompt so I hope this is ok (if not, let me know after the event <3). Happy White Day everyone!

( Happy White Day, Chaos Harmony )

tezuka/fuji, rated: g, art

Comments 20

maeran March 31 2007, 15:46:16 UTC

Woooooooooow~ ♥ ♥ ♥ That's beautiful.

aiwritingfic March 31 2007, 15:47:16 UTC

Bus! And gosh the wind in the pic is making me think of the winds blowing so heavily right now!

ellipsesbandit March 31 2007, 15:57:15 UTC

This is all kinds of awesome and pretty.

shinigami002 March 31 2007, 16:50:40 UTC

Gorgeous ♥

cosmiko March 31 2007, 17:15:00 UTC

The colouring feels a little bumpy(?) at some parts, but overall is far from "horrible". I would say that your pretty drawing style makes up for it.

I ♥ how you draw the wind-blown feel in the clothes and the hair. And also like their expressions (especially Fuji's).

I find a few areas strange though - Fuji's body seems out of proportion (it seems to me that either his upper body or neck would be too long), I don't quite get how the lines run for Tezuka's bottoms, and it feels just a tad strange that Tezuka's jacket is blowing out from under his bag (one might expect the weight of the bag to hold it down and the jacket to flap over the bag rather?). Hope you don't mind me speaking my mind - these are just my personal opinions and it's not like I study art or anything, so I'm not speaking as an expert.

All that said though, I think that those are just details and still think the overall feel of this art makes it a rather lovely piece.

cosmiko April 14 2007, 18:40:46 UTC

Just wanted to clarify some things (that I realise was vague about my previous comment) before the creators are revealed, less it be mistaken that I'm correcting myself based on who you are. :D

By "The colouring feels a little bumpy(?) at some parts", I had actually been specifically refering to dark grey areas of Tezuka's right jacket sleeve and Fuji's bottoms. The brush strokes seemed like they weren't blended as well as the rest of the colouring (like how detailedly the creases of Fuji's jacket were done), and thus left me the impression of it being hastily done. *cough* I might have been overly-critical... ^^; But the rest was beautifully done that the perfection-seeker in me had to point out the bits I find lacking.

And when I said that the rest of the colouring was "far from 'horrible'", I did mean it was good. (I realise expressing in negative form isn't the same as positive form.)