Comments | thehighwaywoman: "The Road Goes Ever On" (24/30) (Sam/Dean)

thehighwaywoman

"The Road Goes Ever On" (24/30) (Sam/Dean)

Apr 15, 2008 15:38

The Road Goes Ever On (24)
(2700 words)

Warnings: Teenchesters (Sam is 16, Dean is 20)
Alternate reality/pre-series.
Rated: Adult (Mild Wincest, natural/supernatural violence, disturbing themes)

Links to previous installments under the cut.

( In which Dean travels through the valley of the shadow of hell. )

the road goes ever on, teenchesters, sam/dean, serial fic

Comments 67

deanshot April 15 2008, 20:43:48 UTC

Well shit, you totally threw me with that one.
Saul is yellow eyes and Hannah is going to die like Mary did but what happens to Joey.
I'm all worried now and it's for Dean.
I hope to god that Sam can get him back out.
I'm so looking forward to tomorrow.
*hugs*

thehighwaywoman April 16 2008, 11:10:05 UTC

*evil laughter oddly combined with wee happy dance* Thank you so much! The story continues shortly...

shelgrainger2 April 15 2008, 20:49:32 UTC

That was creepy. I feel for poor Hannah and Dean watching this happen. What has John put the boys in the middle of? I can't wait for more, this is really gripping even if it gives me the shivers regularly lol!

thehighwaywoman April 16 2008, 11:10:42 UTC

LOL -- the shivers are good, though, at least from where I'm sitting. I honestly didn't think I could ever write creepy. Thank you so much!

roxymissrose April 15 2008, 20:50:49 UTC

oh wow, I didn't think that was it, not at all! No wonder she hates Sam! Boy, this just keeps amping up the suspense! I'm sore from tensing by the time I finish each update! That section where time flows was just stunning-what an incredible visual. I love the way you write the dream sequences, they remind me a bit of a writer from way back--Manly Wade Wellman. He wrote stories based on Appalachian legends and ghost stories.

just_ruth April 15 2008, 21:07:04 UTC

hi there, I'm Ruth and I also like Manly Wade Wellman. :)

roxymissrose April 15 2008, 21:28:27 UTC

well, hello! Yes, he was a great favorite of mine in my youth. :) Nice to meet a fellow admirer.

thehighwaywoman April 16 2008, 11:12:10 UTC

:D :D :D Oh, yes. Now Dean just needs to put the pieces together *cue ominous music* And thank you so, so much for reading and enjoying!

I haven't read Manly Wade Wellman yet, btw, but just_ruth has got me sold on trying him.

just_ruth April 15 2008, 21:04:41 UTC

Oh. Crap. Oh. Crap.

(and I can't help giggling at the above comment where someone mentions Manly Wade Wellman)

thehighwaywoman April 16 2008, 11:12:53 UTC

*cackle* I actually haven't read any of the MWW yet, so I am just uber-tickled by this.

And Oh. Crap.? Yes indeedy. >:D

runedgirl April 15 2008, 21:16:12 UTC

Holy crap!! This is becoming an excellent mystery as well as a beautiful love story. :)

thehighwaywoman April 16 2008, 11:13:11 UTC

*delight* Thank you so much!