Comments | thehighwaywoman: "The Road Goes Ever On" (7/30) (Sam/Dean)

thehighwaywoman

"The Road Goes Ever On" (7/30) (Sam/Dean)

Mar 29, 2008 14:17

The Road Goes Ever On (7/30)
(1800 words)

Warnings: Teenchesters (Sam is 16, Dean is 20)
Alternate reality/pre-series.

Links to previous installments under the cut.

( Dean isn't sure how long he and Sam stand together in the darkness, not moving, not letting go. )

the road goes ever on, teenchesters, sam/dean, serial fic

Comments 76

earthquakedream March 29 2008, 20:04:02 UTC

I love your Sam right here. He's such a cutie. And Dean too, trying to joke away the seriousness, and not getting why Sam gets pissy every time he mentions girls. :D :D

thehighwaywoman March 30 2008, 13:10:23 UTC

Dean's sense of humor/sometimes inappropriate timing and Sam's occasional total lack of humor can seriously collide, as we've seen in canon :D It's fun to explore that in fic. Thank you so much for reading!

xcaileadairx March 29 2008, 20:07:03 UTC

This gets scarier by the chapter, but I still love it, especially Sam being all Fierce!loyal and promising to protect Dean.

thehighwaywoman March 30 2008, 13:10:58 UTC

Thank you so much for hanging on despite the scary! :D (And I do love me some fierce, loyal Sam, too)

paper_cranes March 29 2008, 20:10:46 UTC

onoes!

thehighwaywoman March 30 2008, 13:11:28 UTC

*sadface* Alas, the boys...

Thank you so much for reading! :D

ex_rosegany March 29 2008, 21:08:29 UTC

Oooh. Read everything in one sitting just now, and...

This is delightfully creepy and full of lovely boy tension. I'm really curious about the mythology/lore/etc, and I rarely get to read a good case fic that also features Wincestuousness. I love your Dean voice/POV, and you've captured Sam teenage angst perfectly, and his fierce need/love/compulsion with Dean.

Definitely looking forward to more, and kudos to you for taking on such a challenge!

<3

thehighwaywoman March 30 2008, 13:21:07 UTC

:D :D :D I'm having a lot of fun writing the story this way and coming up with the mythology, lore, trying for twists, turns -- a bit of a thrill ride. And I am really, really glad to hear you like the characterizations of Sam and Dean. Thank you so much!

janissa11 March 29 2008, 21:51:50 UTC

I hadn't read this yet, and now I'm kinda kerfluffled. DAMN John for his mind games. I mean, the lesson might well be a useful one, but unless there's something to be revealed later on, he's pegging my Jackass Meter pretty high. And I could not love protective!Sam more if I TRIED. Man. This story brings the goosebumps all OVER. Fabulous! Looking forward to the next installment!

thehighwaywoman March 30 2008, 13:23:51 UTC

:D That is an awesome comment. Thank you much upon much for stopping by to read, and I'm so glad you liked it!