Fic: "Interpretation of a Moment" (Steve/Danny)

[thehighwaywoman]

I come bearing fic O_O A little bit of something I couldn't get out of my head after last night's pilot episode.

Holy cats, drabbles are tougher than I remembered.Title: "Interpretation of a Moment

Comments

[certainthings]

Lovely. :) I particularly enjoyed "Secrets shouted-begged-sworn in silence in a mirror."

[thehighwaywoman]

:D Thank you!

[blueslashicons]

WOW! This drabble is very beautiful. I too love doing true drabbles because they are such a challenge to fit everything in the 100 word count. You did that and more here. There are so many lines here that I love.

One of them is An ocean's worth of words when they fall silent in the rattle-rattle-bump of the road, breathing promises that cost no Judas kisses. That scene felt so heavy with the intercourse between them that the bromance flew right out the window leaving behind the slash of what could be. They both know betrayal.

Very nicely done! Kudos!

[thehighwaywoman]

\o/ Wow, thank you! It'd been so long since I tried but oh, was it fun!

[thehighwaywoman]

\o/ Thank you! I missed writing fic so much. Steve and Danny make me want to write again. *adores them*

[bi_nocturnal_g]

OMG, This drabble is like living poetry. I drown in the imagery you create.

[thehighwaywoman]

:D :D :D Wow, thank you!

[ratherastory]

Dude, HOW are you in this fandom and I didn't know?!?

Gorgeous drabble. Just lovely and rich and I want to run my fingers over the texture over and over. :)

[thehighwaywoman]

Wow, thank you! This is the first time I've written in the fandom (though I've been drinking in fic since earlier this summer). Now that S2 has started, I'm hoping to be more active. :)

[ratherastory]

Hurray, and welcome to the gloriousness of H50!

Now that we have two fandoms in common, would it be okay if I friended you? :)

[thehighwaywoman]

Absolutely absolutely! I've just checked and saw I hadn't had you friended; shame on me. Friending back :)