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Flight Chapter 6: Farewell

Nov 09, 2009 22:56

Title: Flight: Chapter 6 (Farewell)
Author: Gryphin
Characters/Pairings: Booth, Brennan
Word Count: 2,479
Rating: T
Spoilers: None
Author’s Note: I HIGHLY encourage you to listen to the song this chapter is titled after. Farewell by Rosie Thomas. Gah - I'm still sniffling!!
Summary: She's running from whatever it is between them, but will love ( Read more... )

bones fanfic

Comments 11

sb158 November 10 2009, 09:35:34 UTC

Oh, Temperance, you poor misguided thing! "She would not feel...whatever that had been." It's not some disease that's gonna go away. Sorry, sugar, but you are done! You're gonna feel it, no matter how hard you try to deny it.

Sigh...this is beautiful, and I think probably pretty close to what she'd really feel.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

thegryphin November 10 2009, 17:54:23 UTC

It's not some disease that's gonna go away.

HAHA! You are so right! Silly Brennan...you are the only woman on earth that would want to fight against falling for Seeley Booth. Come ON already!

Thanks for the comment! I'm really glad that you are enjoying this!

colleenmcpinto November 17 2009, 04:15:00 UTC

I thought pretty much the same thing!

I just read all 6 parts together, and it really seems like an episode (or my dream episode). You really get Booth and Brennan. Lots of people write fics where B&B get together, and Brennan is just totally fine with it, and completely succumbs to love. But you really seem to get her; to know that she would have a really difficult time with the emotions and potential consequences of a relationship with Booth.

This is such a wonderful story and I'm really excited to read more!

kyrawolf_rj November 10 2009, 13:14:28 UTC

Great Fic! Each chapter is better ...

Do not kill me with curiosity, please...

Congrets!!!!

thegryphin November 10 2009, 17:52:35 UTC

Aww! Thanks! I am not trying to kill anyone! Although, I admit, my updates have far too much time between them. I'm going to try really hard to hurry up with the next one!

queen_bess November 10 2009, 13:44:22 UTC

EEEE!!! More Flight! *Iz happy*

Poor Brennan. I just want to give her a big hug and then shake her a little bit and tell her to get on a plane BACK to DC when she lands in London. And POOR BOOTH... if they weren't so perfect for each other....

This is wonderful, and was so in character for Brennan (which is often rather difficult!).

thegryphin November 10 2009, 17:51:10 UTC

HAHA! You want to hug and then shake Brennan! ME TOOOOO!! I'm glad that it's coming across like that! Seriously girl...get it together! Booth is a hunky piece of man meat just waiting for YOU! GAH! Good thing she's in my hands now...BwaHaHaHaHa!!!!

I'm really glad that you liked this chapter! =)

lizook12 November 11 2009, 00:53:39 UTC

Ahh, what a wonderful mix of the past and present action and, especially emotions. Here on the plane the escape that she's trying to find isn't going to happen, she can't run from these feelings. Even though she's trying her hardest.

Without fully realizing what she was doing, her fingertips rose to the window, where they pressed delicately against the acrylic pane. He was out there somewhere, maybe even waiting to see her plane rise into the air and head away…away from him. It was ridiculous, but she found her eyes scanning the area just looking for the familiar shape of his body or even the Tahoe
Gah, I love that for so many reasons. First just the entire image of it, but also that she indulges in this completely illogical moment.

So why did she suddenly feel an insane desire to beg the captain to turn back and let her go home? Why did it feel as though tears were hovering at the corners of her eyes, just waiting for the blink that would send them sliding down her cheeks?Oh, Bren, (((hugs))) you bottle those emotions up so ( ... )

thegryphin November 11 2009, 04:16:39 UTC

Awww Liz...you have no idea how well timed your lovely review is! I was in such a negative mood, and you have so cheered me up!! It amazes me how you can get a small piece of mindless criticism from someone that you don't even know, and it can cause a person to feel completely inept! Until I read a review like this and I remember that not everyone fandom-side is an ass... =) Thank you, friend!

lizook12 November 12 2009, 00:11:42 UTC

Aww, I'm so glad it could help buoy your spirits. I had something similar happen recently (someone making a blanket statement about oneshots) and it wasn't until I stumbled upon a review from Miss M that I really started to feel better.

Anyhow, you're welcome (((hugs)))

bite_or_avoid November 11 2009, 04:28:47 UTC

She would not feel...whatever that had been.

Oh, Brennan! *shakes head sadly*

Beautiful, and very believable insight into her here, hon. I keep hoping against hope that she'll break down on her layover and take a flight back to DC, but that is definitely too much to hope for.... right? ;) Love the back and forth between the present and the past. I can't tell you how happy I was to see this updated :)