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thegreymoon

FIC: Dire Consequences 29/??

Aug 09, 2012 07:05

Title: Dire Consequences 29/??

Fandom: Viewfinder

Pairings: Mik/Fei

Disclaimer: I do not own Viewfinder or any of its characters. This is a fanfic and I’m not making any profit from it.

Rating: R

Warnings: Dub-con, violence, language, angst. Please take the warnings seriously, people, they are here for a reason!

Previous chapters: http://thegreymoon. ( Read more... )

viewfinder, mik x fei, fanfiction

Comments 14

kajornwan August 9 2012, 10:10:46 UTC

I know I have been on your back over this update, and while I am sorry for this, I am glad I did :D ( ... )

thegreymoon August 10 2012, 15:05:29 UTC

LOL, thank you very much! XDDD

Eh, in fiction, I always find the angst and the passion way hotter than exotic toys and kinks. The basics are always the best for me, which is why I always love reading/writing about first-time sex and 'milestone' sex, where the characters are at some breaking point!

Writing the argument was both difficult and a lot of fun, because these chapters now are the last of Asami, after them, both Mik and Fei find closure and move on with their lives without the shadows of the past.

Fei is a lot of fun to write, because he is so violently emotional and his reactions are such explosions! You know that I have always been a fan of Asami and that Asami is the reason why I got into this fandom, but I have gotten so tired of him responding to everything with 'whatever' and *smirk*. Ugh. :(

P.S. What is so hot about 50 Shades of Grey??? I tried reading those sex scenes and all I felt was second-hand embarrassment! I've read fanfiction with better porn!!! *goes cry*

kajornwan August 10 2012, 15:09:25 UTC

Later.

Get your ass on YA comm NOW!

thegreymoon August 10 2012, 15:24:06 UTC

OMG, Yan/Fei! YES!!!! XDDDDD

Thread 9

char_comet August 9 2012, 13:44:18 UTC

Please explain this to me cause I fear that my understanding of english failed me here:

Mikhail laughed. “You? Understood me correctly?” he said. “That would be a precedent! Believe me when I say that there is nothing even remotely entertaining about this for anyone involved, least of all me!”Is Mikhail telling that making Fei sleep with him is not entertaining for him? Mayne did he mean that he had preferred to have him in bed willingly rather than that way ( ... )

thegreymoon August 10 2012, 14:37:35 UTC

Actually, Terry, you understand the psychology behind Mik's actions very well ( ... )

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thegreymoon August 9 2012, 18:40:55 UTC

LOL, thank you very much! I am glad that you liked it! XD

angel0399 September 18 2012, 02:29:42 UTC

I totally fail as a friend that it's taken me this long to read and comment *cries* But I'm totally in love with this chapter!! I love how demanding and possessive Mikhail is. I know it wasn't easy for him to say the truth to Fei, but neither was it easy to watch him fall apart because of Asami and Aki (a person Mikhail probably wouldn't even get hard for, let alone want). And you're right-- to watch him pine over Asami and constantly compare himself to Aki (in a way) made him just say "Fuck this" and take what he wanted.

I'm afraid that Fei's too far gone to have the sense knocked into him.

thegreymoon September 19 2012, 18:48:31 UTC

Awww! *hugs*

You are an AWESOME friend! Reading and commenting on fanfiction (that I don't even update very regularly) isn't any kind of requirement for that! *hugs some more*

Teehee! I am glad that you liked this chapter! Poor Mik! *pats him* Fei is really not making it easy for him! It's about time Mik lost his temper (with some smexy consequences :P)!