FIC: Ultimate Pain- Oneshot

[thegreymoon]

Title: Ultimate Pain

Fandom: Tekken

Pairing : None, because Kazuya and Lee are like twelve years old here.

Disclaimer: I do not own Tekken or any of its characters. I am not making any profit from this.

Rating: PG

Warnings: Angst

Author's note: This is a childhood fic for Kazuya and Lee. It belongs to the same universe as Ultimate Hate, but it can

Comments

[baby_fei]

[thegreymoon]

LOL! Where did you come from? :P

[baby_fei]

You have to understand how miserable it is that my most favorite Mik x Fei writer refuses to write Mik x Fei. *crieeessssssss*

[thegreymoon]

I can't help it! Kazuya made me! And Kazuya is scary! :P

[dracosani]

Yay I love your kazuya/lee stories -^_^- there's not enough stories about them
I love how kazuya starts defending lee when he thought that lee had been
picked on by the popular kids and the moment with kazuya's mother was
was so sweet, basically I love the whole story. And the ending made me not
so much LOL but ROFL.
When are you updating Ultimate Hate? Please update it soon. :D

[thegreymoon]

Thank you! I am very happy that you are enjoying my stories! ^__^

It is true, there just isn't enough Kazuya/Lee out there and the little Tekken yaoi that does exist, focuses mostly on Jin and Hwoarang (don't get me wrong, I love Jin/Hwoarang, I just wish that there was some more Kazuya/Lee around too)!

Hehe, nobody is allowed to pick on Lee, except for Kazuya himself and ironically, he is probably the only man who can get away with it! :P

I will update Ultimate Hate as soon as I can! The next part is written out in rough already, it just needs a LOT of editing before I can post! ^__^

[angel0399]

This was so awesome!! It was cute when Kazuya was trying to hide his feelings and not cry in front of Lee.

*runs from Kaz for describing him and cute in the same sentence*

[thegreymoon]

Thank you! I am glad that you enjoyed it! ^__^

Hehehe, actually I think that even canon agrees on the fact that Kazuya started out as a cute kid, but years of pressure, neglect and abuse at the hands of his crazy father turned him into the monster that he is now! D:

[angel0399]

Ah good point!

[wana10]

hehe...the ending had me laughing out loud :D this is a good dose girl, really liked it after waiting for kazuya and lee for so long :) you never disappoint!! thanks! i like how lee is so sensible and caring (though it was already indicated in previous chapters, it's still nice to have a peak into the past).

[thegreymoon]

Thank you so much! I am so glad that you enjoyed the story! *hugs*

I am happy to see that so many people were cheered up by that ending, I had been afraid that the fic may turn out to be too depressing and I was in a mood to write something sweet! ^__^

LOL, I always kind of imagine Lee as being the sensible one of the two, which is a sorry state of things when you think about it, because Lee doesn't really strike me as a particularly sane character either! :P

[wana10]

being in Mishima family and all, it's a miracle to stay sane :P it's as if, being paranoid, insane and evil is due to the survival instinct ;) oh well, at least Lee does not loose it like kazuya does, however, that guy probably experience more rough handling compared to Lee :(

you are right, the cheerful atmosphere at the end does make the reader give a sigh of relief :) it's so cute!
i do love dark and depressive tone though, how twisted of me :S

[thegreymoon]

I think that Lee just got off to a better start than Kazuya, because he was adopted into the family after he'd had the chance to experience his earliest childhood elsewhere! Somehow, I think that even as an orphan living on the streets, he still managed to gather more happy memories than Kazuya. Or maybe he just has a friendlier disposition, so no matter what happens, he doesn't go on a murderous rampage! :P

[nosferatu_blue]

Omfg, this is so good. I must comment with my favourite parts:

Only this time, Lee hadn’t made the first step towards reconciliation like he usually did and Kazuya couldn’t bring himself to try, because the possibility of reaching out and being rejected was more than he could endure.

♥ I love this line. It really gives a nice insight into the workings of Kazuya's mind. Lee is the one to extend the olive branch and Kazuya can't... this makes Lee braver, no? :D

He disliked women with blind, undiscriminating passion-they were soft, they were small, they were weak- more alike to prey than an object of affection, so he wasn’t much of a judge of what passed as beautiful among them.

This seems like something that Heihachi would instill in him. I wonder what his thoughts were when he encountered his first female fighters.

His stomach did strange flips when Lee touched him like that. It was affection instead of violence and it felt excruciatingly good. He never wanted it to stop. Please, please, please, don’t stop! Don’t ever stop!

[thegreymoon]

Thank you so much! I am very happy that you enjoyed the story! ^__

[nosferatu_blue]

This is true. Lee does seem better adjusted to social graces than Kazuya. (His time in America probably contributed to that, too. Any time away from Heihachi would make for a normal experience.)

I like that theory of how Kazuya views Jun. She's strong and can stand against him, and he's just not accustomed to a woman doing that. (Lol, or men, for that matter, which is why Lee is above them all in his mind.)

I think that during his childhood and youth, family was very important to Lee, which is why he would have tried so hard to win Heihachi’s love and approval. Following the same logic, he would probably let Kazuya get away with just about anything, if it meant being brothers in return.

I like this very much, especially since Lee probably did have a family, but lost them and ended up on the streets in China. Having had a family and losing it made him that much more aware of how valuable it was to have one. So when he got in with Heihachi and Kazuya, he did his darnedest to fit in!

And even though he is all stoic and

[thegreymoon]

LOL, I think that a peek into Heihachi's porn collection would definitely be a case of "OW, MY EYES!!!" XDDD Not especially because he would have some disgusting stuff there, but more because the very idea of Heihachi having a sexual identity is sort of a taboo to me, kind of like thinking about your parents having sex! :D

I recently came across this person classifying all erotic literature into three categories: porn, bad porn and 'you see it and then your eyes sue you'-porn! I LOL-ed so hard at that! IMO, Heihachi's stash of porn would be of the third kind! :P