Echoes Through Eternity (Part 1)

[thegearsoftime]

Ok fairly new to this whole fanfic writing business and livejournal in general so bear with me.  

Comments

[tonyabuchanan]

I really enjoyed this first chapter it is a wonderful beginning, that is also very different and interesting; I will love to see more of it.

Wow

[ext_393235]

That was a great opening chapter. I'm completely enthralled. I hope you realize that means I will hunt you done and force you to keep writing if you don't post another chapter SOON.

[tristianmakhai]

Ooooh, very interesting. Count me in! (for the reading ride)

[magicmumu]

Interesting start. Definately curious to see where you take this story. I love how you have Myka as a lesbian in this one. Can't wait for more.

Erin

[deversum]

Awesome start! :D Man, you've got me very interested in this fic already ;)
Gotta say, i'm sorry, i do realize that Murray is a common surname, but there's NO way i won't be imagining teenage!Myka crushing on a Jaime Murray look-a-like here, especially if she was a piano teacher, tehehe >:) Kudos for the little tibids of Myka not being scared about her lady crushing btw, i think that's a first.

Oh, i have no idea if Myka accidentally debronzed Helena or now, but it doesn't matter for now, what's important is that they already met and i cannot wait to see Myka's reaction upon the obvious :)