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thegazette5

Fanfic: Used

Dec 05, 2010 01:41

Title: Used

Pairing: Shindong/Donghae

Rating: NC-17

Genre: Drama, Angst

Warning: Sex though not too graphic, heavy angst, language.

Disclaimer: Boys are not mine. Not real I made this up.

Summary: Even boys get insecure.

Author’s Note: Summary sucks. This is a lot longer than I intended. I think this is my second longest oneshot. Another post for the ( Read more... )

pairing: shindong/donghae, warning: nc-17 rating, type: fanfic, length: oneshot, 100 super junior fic challenge, fandom: super junior

Comments 15

pjvj10 December 6 2010, 00:37:37 UTC

wow. first time reading this paring...what can you even call this? shinhae? dongdong? LOL NO BUT OMG THIS WAS SOOO GOOD
SO EMOTIONAL, AND RAW AND HEARTBREAKING (until the fully ending ofcourse)
I love the characterization! and the whole scene with Eunhae- so cute and really kind of hot
GOOD JOB! it was really well written :)

thegazette5 December 6 2010, 00:42:28 UTC

Haha dongdong. Shinhae I think is good. Very rare pairing. In fact every fic I read with Shindong he is either purely straight or a good friend. I had to do it.

Thank you very much. It took me forever to write so I'm happy you liked it and read it.

summer0smiles December 6 2010, 00:58:25 UTC

ShinHae? Ahahaha. THIS WAS SO GOOD!

I love love love the friendship between EunHae here. It was so sweet and Eunhyuk was really rooting for his friend. And Donghae completely trusting his friend is just <33333

BAD SHINDONG! Treating Hae like that! *smacks his head* But the fluff made up for it~~ Omg. I'm not shipping this pairing and YET I'm loving this so much!

Great job! =)

thegazette5 December 6 2010, 01:10:06 UTC

Something just happened to put me in a bad mood but your comment helped me get rid of it. Thank you very much.

summer0smiles December 6 2010, 01:29:12 UTC

Aw. *Punches whoever or whatever that got you into a bad mood* There, I took care of it! XD Cheer up~ *hugs*

thegazette5 December 6 2010, 05:44:31 UTC

Thanks! *hugs back*

bonomanic December 6 2010, 02:54:22 UTC

I skipped the fluff ending because I feel the angsty one fit much better with the general mood of the fic. I do love me my happy endings, but sometimes, it's better without ( ... )

thegazette5 December 6 2010, 06:02:59 UTC

Thank you very much for your comment. I really appreciate that you took the time, not only to read this, but write such a thorough comment.

In my head I had always seen them ending up together but when I reached the angsty end, it felt complete and right. I wrote the rest because I felt obligated to since its how I saw it. Which could be why I didn't like how it turned out.

It is funny how we can see certain people sexually but not others. I was afraid people wouldn't be able to buy them. I'm glad you took that leap of faith and its good to know my summary was not as bad as I thought it was. I was worried it would be misleading.

Thanks!

mallo_mousey December 6 2010, 04:13:41 UTC

SPOT! I saw Shingdong smut and I want etttt.....
Reading now~

thegazette5 December 6 2010, 05:45:42 UTC

Hopefully it did not disappoint.

mallo_mousey December 6 2010, 05:48:50 UTC

It didnt disappoint at all~ <3
Gawd, the world needs more Shinnie smut. And it was really well written:D

thegazette5 December 6 2010, 06:03:43 UTC

Thank you!!!! :D

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whatyoudoing09 December 6 2010, 11:50:46 UTC

ShinHae omg no one ever writes Shindong in an nc17 pairing.
I love that you did that!
SHINDONG HAS SEX PEOPLE! EVEN IN FICS! HAHHA
awesome job and brilliantly written.
This was brilliant.
Honastly
<3

thegazette5 December 6 2010, 20:22:05 UTC

Lol thank you very much