The Third Original Fiction Drabble-thon!

[thegalecity]

Hello hello hello, everyone! Becky/ruffwriter again. Since I know a lot of us resolved to write more for the new year, what do you say we get warmed up with another round of the Drabble-thon? The idea of this is to write something, anything at all, with your own original characters

Comments

[chibimazoku]

Kiiind of sucks and is kind of unfinished, but my goal was mostly to just write something

To say that the factory had seen better days would be an exaggeration of the worst kind. Everything that hadn't been bolted down -- and some machinery that had been -- was either long gone or lying in pieces on the floor. What had once been the domain of humans had become its own strange imitation of a natural landscape. Rust covered everything Cain's flashlight illuminated like some sort of slowly-creeping mold, orangey-red flakes even falling from the decaying roof in a twisted imitation of snow

[ruffwriter]

WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT your drabbles are always fabulous. This is so atmospheric and creepy and I'd read more in a second, mmmmmmm...

[noelleno]

Dude I really really like this. You set it up great, and I really wish I knew what happened next!

[crevanfox]

and then....

Argh, I'm on the edge of my seat here.

Good job, even if you left us all hanging ;)

[ivory_and_horn]

Ahhhh *hides* I have to agree with what everyone else has said, this was wonderfully creepy right from the start.