merry happy camelot swap christmas (arthur/gwen, part two)

Dec 25, 2009 21:12

Title: Merry Happy Camelot Swap Christmas (Part 2 of 2)
Fandom: Merlin
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Arthur/Gwen, Morgana, Merlin, Will, Leon, various others mentioned & OCs.
Spoilers/Warning: No spoilers. Completely AU, in a modern-day setting. Beware crack and ridiculousness.
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robinmarian December 25 2009, 22:26:49 UTC
I loved this! hehe Cute mistletoe scene!

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thedreamygirl December 27 2009, 00:18:37 UTC
Thank you :)

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mustbethursday3 December 26 2009, 05:05:39 UTC
"He might have done dirty things with it before he wrapped it."

That had me giggling so hard I had to stop reading for a moment.

I really love this little fic - Gwen/Merlin are really cute, Gwen/Morgana is FANTASTIC (this is the way it should be on the show - Ugh why can't those writer's write women?), Gwen/Arthur was so sweet and I love that she was still composed and able to form sentences after the kiss, while Arthur was all gaga and stunned and there was even a little Merlin/Gwen/Morgana interaction and BFFness! And Will back from the dead, a nice addition since he wasn't throwing around guilt trips (I love that he couldn't resist saying that he's NOT friends with Arthur).

You're really good with the dialogue, it's very snappy and witty and I'm not gonna quote all the bits I liked, coz the list would be really long - but I have to mention: Gwen's comment on Arthur's mouth - I <3 saucy Gwen and the whole Morgana stalking Leon thing. Oh why, oh why did 2.12 have to happen? Could it not have waited til S3? After watching Merlin ( ... )

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thedreamygirl December 27 2009, 00:20:56 UTC
Aww, thank you so much for your lovely comment, I'm glad you liked it. It was a lot of fun to write - especially Gwen and Morgana hehe!

Arthur would look kind of adorable in mittens and a big wooly hat.

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til_tomorrow December 26 2009, 05:32:34 UTC
Loved every bit of it. I loved Morgana not giving up on hounding Leon and Arthur's rambling brain about Gwen and his mittens which of course just happens to be red. I LOL'd at Merlin's color choices. Blue, red, brown. Such a little thing but I loved you put that in there. It was very enjoyable to read =)

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thedreamygirl December 27 2009, 00:22:12 UTC
Thanks very much! I couldn't help but put that in, I had no problem imagining everyone else in normal modern day clothes, but with Merlin I kept picturing his little neckchiefs!

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nasirid December 26 2009, 10:58:04 UTC
*waves her new friend*

Awww. What a nice story! :D I loved it from the beginning. I think you nailed the characters, even when, of course, they're not in Camelot. I love how Arthur was all the time 'I don't feel anything for Gwen', trying to explain himself too much, so you end up knowing how he really feels. And Gwen, being as nice as always, and when she made the mittons for Arthur. That was so sweet <3

And you even include Will and Leon!! Oh god, I think I love you. No, really. I liked everyone: Merlin, Morgana (oh man, I hope she does something for New Year's eve hahaha And Go Morgana, Go, don't give up with Leon!). Everyone, really.

The only thing is... now you let me wondering what will happen with those two after the kiss!! I want to see them again! (if i use my *puppy eyes* face, would it work if i asked for more of this? ^^) The kiss, btw, was so beautiful and cute and awww Arthur <3333

Great fic, hon. I lovely gift for Christmas. Enjoyed very much "The Office" references, btw.

Thanks for sharing with us! :D

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thedreamygirl December 27 2009, 00:27:54 UTC
Hello! *waves back*

Thank you very much! :D I really wanted all the characters to still feel like the same people, even though everything was so so different, so I'm glad it did for you. And it was fun to have Leon and Will in it too.

HEE, how can I deny puppy eyes? I hadn't originally intended to when I first planned it, but I've gone so far from that original vague idea, I suppose even further couldn't hurt! I've been warming to the idea of continuing in this AU although I don't know for sure if I will yet. But it's certainly possibly once I've finished off some other fics I might revisit it! :)

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winwin7 December 26 2009, 11:52:31 UTC
lovely fic!enjoyed reading it very much

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thedreamygirl December 27 2009, 00:28:14 UTC
Thank you :D

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