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demolition lovers

May 31, 2009 20:29

Title: Demolition Lovers
Author: RaeLouise
Rating: NC:17
Pairing: Joe/Nick
Disclaimer: I do not own the Jonas Brothers & this did not happen. I also do not own the lyrics used in this piece, they belong to My Chemical Romance and The Used.
Warnings: pretty long, incest, underage sex, swearing, alcohol consumption
Word Count: 4871
Summary: Joe ( Read more... )

pairing: joe/nick, fandom: jonas brothers, !fanfiction, !oneshot

Comments 28

carriedmyheart May 31 2009, 20:49:40 UTC

amazing!!
enough said.

raelouise May 31 2009, 21:11:51 UTC

thank you so much!!

carriedmyheart May 31 2009, 21:14:33 UTC

of course :)

iheartvmars07 May 31 2009, 21:00:58 UTC

wow..that was incredible

raelouise May 31 2009, 21:12:11 UTC

thank you infinitely =]

joshtin4lyfe May 31 2009, 21:52:41 UTC

wow that was so good. I love how you expressed Joe's emotions and Nick's too. I could get into this fic and BELIEVE it you know? it wasn't too much. this was wonderful, bb.

raelouise May 31 2009, 22:44:03 UTC

Thank you- so glad you enjoyed it!! =]

joshtin4lyfe May 31 2009, 22:46:33 UTC

you're welcome, hun

tea_biscuit May 31 2009, 22:18:24 UTC

Breathtaking. Absolutely breathtaking. Beautifully raw.

::applauds you::

raelouise May 31 2009, 22:45:02 UTC

Thank you, this comment means so much, don't think I've ever been comment applauded, before.

jljso May 31 2009, 23:32:15 UTC

Wow. I loved this. Like really, really loved this.

I love how it made me think.

I think my favorite part has to be the "If you loved me..." parts: “If you loved me,” Joe sneers, spit flying from between his lips- he’s a blur, too close for Nick to focus, “You’d kiss back, I wouldn’t need to hold you here, Nicholas, you’d willingly walk into my arms- you’d of met me from the plane, ran at me with your goddamn arms wide!”

“If you loved me, Joseph, you wouldn’t of needed picking up from the airport- you’d of been home already, would of walked Elvis with me this morning, grabbed a Subway with me. We could be writing now, we could be swimming, talking, watching a movie. If you loved me we wouldn’t be… wherever the fuck this is, you wouldn’t be leaving bruises!”

I loved Nick's especially.

I feel like just saying I loved this is kinda cheap but I REALLY DID : )

raelouise June 1 2009, 00:03:22 UTC

thank you so much for putting the time in to comment.
and really, hearing that you loved it is awesome enough for me, don't worry!!