Hi anon! I'm glad you are excited about the idea; hopefully the story won't disappoint (or hasn't been if you've read it already) and will give you even more excitement durin reading!
ALEX. ALEX THIS WAS ALL KINDS OF PERFECT. SERIOUSLY. I loved the dynamics between Mark and Wardo and they were kinda different from the usual in a very good way. FOUR FOR YOU ALEX YOU GO ALEX
Thank you, Alex! :D They were supposed to be different (because I want to be a special snowflake and not write what everybody else is writing - mainly so people can't compare me to writers who are better than me ;_;), and I'm glad it works!
Thank you! I've been on the fence about the alternating POVs myself, they tend to disrupt the flow of a story and one runs the risk of getting repetitive, but I couldn't figure out how to tell the story I wanted through just one character's eyes, and I figured it turned out long enough I could give both of them enough space to be valid. ...I ended up colour-coding my scenes at some point to make sure they were evenly spread and one didn't read like an afterthought. But seeing that it works and people enjoy it all the work was worth it!
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