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TSN: We Lived on Farms

Nov 05, 2011 22:56

Title: We Lived on Farms
Author: des_pudels_kern
Fandom: The Social Network
Pairing, Characters: Mark, Eduardo (hints at slash), with bonus awesome!Dustin
Rating: PG-13
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Comments 16

xbriyeon November 8 2011, 19:11:19 UTC

oh, tears.. this is hilarious. \o/

gonna be a bit nitpicky though =X

"Your chicken don't lay eggs."
should be "Your chicken doesn't lay eggs."

thedeepeekay November 8 2011, 22:01:59 UTC

...Actually, it's supposed to be chickens, as in a whole farm of them. This is what I get for writing when I should be sleeping, sorry.

But I'm glad you enjoyed it despite that! And thank you for taking the time to comment, I appreciate it.

casey_sms November 14 2011, 06:04:42 UTC

Awww. So cute. I love it.

Funny and thoughtful and personal. And ironic. That's what birthday presents were supposed to be like (aside from the whole irony thing), it was not about how much they cost. Or so people (Chris and Dustin) kept telling him. Not that it wasn't still pretty expensive. Though he didn't exactly go looking around for the best offer. He had the idea, he found the next-best place in the area, and he threw enough money at them to get the papers by the next day.

Last minute present buying Mark! Ahahaha.

Love the description of the egg - so scientifically correct!

"That may be, but my chicken farm has switched to free-range laying hens. Less likely to get me accused of animal cruelty than the professional slaughter of one-month-old broilers bred and fed to the point where their legs can't carry their own weight. I'm not sure my reputation could handle another chicken-related scandal."

Oh Wardo, finally getting the hang of chicken care!

"…But you didn't call when you got it. Or text, or email, or message. I ( ... )

thedeepeekay November 14 2011, 19:00:21 UTC

:D Thank you!

It's not last minute. He still had days to go. Days!

Aww, like Mark loves Wardo! I feel honoured, and like I should check if my name is still at the bottom of the Fandombook post. Just in case you have been talking to anyone trying to turn you against me with animal and party analogies. DO NOT LISTEN TO ANYONE PLYING YOU WITH APPLETINIS! (Not that there's anything wrong with appletinis. Best drink for the TSN drinking game.)

He thought that it would be obvious! Doesn't a present speak for itself? He put thought into it! It was hard work! He wouldn't have done that if he didn't care! (Except where he created a whole web page ust to show Erica how littlehe cared about her, but we are all grown up now and have matured and are not talking about that anymore.)

...He just doesn't want to get egg on his laptop. That's all.

I KNOW! SEAN IS SO PARANOID HE'S THE PERFECT VICTIM!

I have now btw filled my happy ending quota. ANGST! MORE ANGST!

You're welcome. Thank you. :)