Earth, Clay, Death (FMA, Roy/Hughes)

Sep 12, 2005 12:21

Title: Earth, Clay, Death
Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing: Roy/Hughes
Summary: "And our bodies are earth. And our thoughts are clay. And we eat and sleep with death."
Rating: PG-13/R -ish
Feedback: Please?
Notes: Extraordinarily late response to yahtzee63's Greatest Movie Lines Challenge. Unbetaed, very short, and in manga canon. Warfic.

Earth, Clay, Death )

fic, slash, fma

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anchorstine September 12 2005, 21:08:27 UTC
That was so beautifully written... I love how it's so short and to the point and yet carries so much meaning along with it.
I also love how you write present tense and MANGA-VERSE, not enough people do.

You're one of my favorite FMA writers. <3

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thedeadparrot September 13 2005, 14:25:55 UTC
Thanks.

I think at this point I write in the present tense far more naturally than I write in the past. It's very strange.

Very glad you liked!

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thedeadparrot September 13 2005, 14:31:48 UTC
Hmm. Well, I've heard it both with and without the "white", so it's probably not you hearing it wrong.

Glad you liked it. :)

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glassbomb September 13 2005, 00:23:11 UTC
I have three words for you: subtle, precise, perfect.

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thedeadparrot September 13 2005, 14:39:25 UTC
Thank you!

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jabbertalky September 13 2005, 02:38:44 UTC
This is so gorgeous. I absolutely adore it.

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thedeadparrot September 13 2005, 15:25:53 UTC
Glad you enjoyed. :)

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chosha_sama September 13 2005, 04:30:10 UTC
Wow. That was so wonderfully perfect. How I love HughesxRoy, and you've just made me love it more ^___^

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thedeadparrot September 13 2005, 15:43:42 UTC
HUGHES/ROY = TEH AWESOME 4EVA!!!!!!1!1111!!!!

Er, yeah. Thank you. ;)

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