I LOVED THIS. SO MUCH! thank you dearest author you made my day i read this while taking a break from studying physics and felt instantly ALIVE and REFRESHED afterwards. this was almost exactly what i wanted <3
ahhh the rv girls were so cute thank you adding them!!! i also thought juhyun and sooyoung were snsd seohyun and sooyoung but at the end i realized they were irene and joy. the pink stuff made more sense then haha.
tao's dramatic ~Sands of Time~
the story of how bkchn met was so so so so good i'll cry the next time i see a pink shirt, probably.
Junmyeon comes back soon after, much to Minseok’s relief. After, there is a barrage of questions from the two boys where Junmyeon confirms that: “Yes, magic books can exist if you imbue magi- yes, magic wands exist too, if you really wanted to- yes brooms can be made to fly, you just have to- Please let me talk Baekhyun- Yes Jongdae, there are magical creatur- No the Leviathan doesn’t exist anymore Baek- No, Jongdae, Pikachu isn’t- Minotaurs are real, ye- Minseok, please help me ou
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Ah you're welcome! I'm so glad you liked it! I was so worried since I've never written something quite like this before! <3
TBH I think it could go either way with SNSD or RV since SNSD's color is pink but I did write it with Irene in mind, haha. I know you wanted other SMTown members too and originally I had more plan, but I couldn't get it all in!
Jongdae and his shirt is my favorite thing ever. He's actually asking Minseok how to wash it in the one scene <3 He still keeps the shirt in the end even though Baek gets him a new one. Heehee
Baekchen interacting with Suho is like my favorite part haha <3 I'm glad you liked Chanyeol! I was afraid he came off too brash.
I DIDN'T WANT TO HURT JONGDAE! REALLY. T_T I just-
I'm so happy you liked the ending. There was no way I would've ended it badly but I'm glad it wasn't too corny or anything haha.
Thank you so much for your prompts! I'm so happy you liked it! I had a hard time deciding between this and the other ones (and I might still write the other ones later if you don't mind!).
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for a first attempt @ something like this IT WAS SOOOOO GOOD!
ahaha that was completely up to you. the rv kids were a good addition! if there were more smtown people popping up it might have gotten out of control :)
nah corniness is the best it was the perfect way to end imo!!
omg OF COURSE I DON'T MIND! PLEASE GO AHEAD WRITE ANYTHING YOU WANT!!!!
let me start off by saying that i have read every single fic in this exchange and yours was the last one i've read (so far) and it truly was a case of save the best for last! seeing the word count, i already had some expectations and u totally met and surpassed them! now let me gush about the story
first of all the friendship! that's the thing that i love about baekchen the most - the ease & comfort level they have with each other in real life, the natural skinship and how often even in a big group, they're in their own little world and the first half of this fic portrayed that so well. i love love love when Baekhyun is portrayed as the more protective one - earning money to feed and clothe jongdae and taking him out on dates /crying/
He looks small in that shirt, Baekyhun thinks to himself. I'll get him a better fitted shirt next time. baekhyun being all oppa around jongdae ♥ really!
Baekhyun chokes and buries his head in the crook of Jongdae's neck. His beautiful, kind Jongdae isn't a freak. The bantering when Jongdae suggests
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Yixing making him ramen and Jongdae merely telling him its okay << from 902014 right? i chuckled. it was a nice light moment in the midst of the angst.
Juhyun sighs, “It is but it doesn’t hurt to see him for a bit.” “Actually it does.” Maternal instincts to cuddle and protect Baekhyun level = 10000000000000000
the entire part when chanyeol in his phoenix form comes back carrying jongdae in his arms, baekhyun yanking jongdae's body to himself, his rage -- was really well written, beautiful and emotional!/applauds/ i felt like i was watching a movie - picturing the scenes in my mind!!
Desperately, Baekhyun cradles Jongdae's face with both of his hands and leans closer. He presses his forehead to Jongdae’s in an attempt somehow transfer the words in his head to Jongdae. In a small voice, he says to him, “You're my only one, Jongdae, please.”O♥M♥G this is unnecessary information but i was reading Mindy Kaling's book and there's a part where she writes about how the most romantic moment for her was that part in Bridget Jones' where
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I love Baekchen so much because of their friendship! They're so touchy and stuff irl that I wanted to bring some of that into the fic. >_< I feel like Baek irl is quite protective of JD so that's why. Hee! I actually brought a lot of my headcanon into writing them (and also my bias as you can probably tell) so asdfghjk I couldn't bear hurting them but for the sake fo the story XD
And yes it is from 902014 haha
The scene when CY brings JD was actually one of the first written scenes. I built everything around it HAHA
Baekchen cuddles and kisses are the best =D
I had a blast writing the side characters haha I was worried maybe I wrote about them a little bit too much but I'm glad you enjoyed them! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Your comment made me very happy!
I'm always in for a good AU with magical powers and did this story deliver!
While reading I imagined some kind of X-men world/set-up and I loved your story :)
Despite some heartbreaking undertones, you kept the fic light and flowing preventing it from becoming too heavy or angsty. The emotions were so touching though and I was so invested in your characters and the plot that I cried on more than one occassion. The love and bond between Baekhyun and Jongdae was really beautiful and the way that they complimented each other both with their powers as on an emotional level got me rooting for them from beginning to end :)
I realy enjoyed reading this and thank you for writing this!
I actually did model a little bit after the x-men world amongst other things heehee
I'm really glad that the fic wasn't too much in any extreme. I added the jokes in, but I was so worried that they didn't fit in with the story. >_< I was worried about their relationship the most because I wasn't sure if it came across that they loved each other as much as I knew they did, so I'm glad to hear you say so!
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting! <3
Wow. This was amazing! Seriously! Baekhyun forever protective of Jongdae and buys him shirts /cries When Baek got jealous and they fought, it was so heartbreaking because they give each other silent treatment but Jongdae still asks about Baek's whereabouts anyways. Just...this is perfect. All the litttle things they do to show they care for each other. Definitely one of the best fics i have ever read.
Baekhyun totally babies Jongdae, he can't help himself.The silent treatment was so stupid since they both were still asking about the other. But yeah, it made them closer! So all is well!
I'm glad you like the little details. I'm totally one for small gestures as opposed to big ones. XD Thank you for reading and commenting!
I know I'm a selfish person but I really wish that this fic would be longer. This fic is so beautiful that it's a pity when I read the last paragraph because I don't want this to end so fast. I feel a variety of emotion when I read this, and I keep teared up at the second part. I'm not exagerating but I really can feel each of emotion that you try to portray. I can feel Baek frustration, anxiety, all the uncertainty. It hurt every time he try to hide himself. And it even more hurt when all Jongdae want is the best for Baekhyun but Baek just can't see it. And MAMA au can never go wrong. Anyway, it's a good read, thanks authornim ^^
Ah no I know the feeling of wanting to read more! There was initially more to written but I did cut some stuff out. Maybe someday I'll write more, but until then, just this. haha. I'm so happy that Baek's emotions came through. It hurt so much to write Baekhyun suffering cause I wanted to bundle him up, but in the end, he has Jongdae and whole family so it's all good. I love MAMA au so I'm glad I got a chance to write it! Thank you for the lovely comment! ^__^
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ahhh the rv girls were so cute thank you adding them!!! i also thought juhyun and sooyoung were snsd seohyun and sooyoung but at the end i realized they were irene and joy. the pink stuff made more sense then haha.
tao's dramatic ~Sands of Time~
the story of how bkchn met was so so so so good i'll cry the next time i see a pink shirt, probably.
Junmyeon comes back soon after, much to Minseok’s relief. After, there is a barrage of questions from the two boys where Junmyeon confirms that: “Yes, magic books can exist if you imbue magi- yes, magic wands exist too, if you really wanted to- yes brooms can be made to fly, you just have to- Please let me talk Baekhyun- Yes Jongdae, there are magical creatur- No the Leviathan doesn’t exist anymore Baek- No, Jongdae, Pikachu isn’t- Minotaurs are real, ye- Minseok, please help me ou ( ... )
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TBH I think it could go either way with SNSD or RV since SNSD's color is pink but I did write it with Irene in mind, haha. I know you wanted other SMTown members too and originally I had more plan, but I couldn't get it all in!
Jongdae and his shirt is my favorite thing ever. He's actually asking Minseok how to wash it in the one scene <3 He still keeps the shirt in the end even though Baek gets him a new one. Heehee
Baekchen interacting with Suho is like my favorite part haha <3 I'm glad you liked Chanyeol! I was afraid he came off too brash.
I DIDN'T WANT TO HURT JONGDAE! REALLY. T_T I just-
I'm so happy you liked the ending. There was no way I would've ended it badly but I'm glad it wasn't too corny or anything haha.
Thank you so much for your prompts! I'm so happy you liked it! I had a hard time deciding between this and the other ones (and I might still write the other ones later if you don't mind!). ( ... )
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ahaha that was completely up to you. the rv kids were a good addition! if there were more smtown people popping up it might have gotten out of control :)
nah corniness is the best it was the perfect way to end imo!!
omg OF COURSE I DON'T MIND! PLEASE GO AHEAD WRITE ANYTHING YOU WANT!!!!
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first of all the friendship! that's the thing that i love about baekchen the most - the ease & comfort level they have with each other in real life, the natural skinship and how often even in a big group, they're in their own little world and the first half of this fic portrayed that so well. i love love love when Baekhyun is portrayed as the more protective one - earning money to feed and clothe jongdae and taking him out on dates /crying/
He looks small in that shirt, Baekyhun thinks to himself. I'll get him a better fitted shirt next time.
baekhyun being all oppa around jongdae ♥ really!
Baekhyun chokes and buries his head in the crook of Jongdae's neck. His beautiful, kind Jongdae isn't a freak. The bantering when Jongdae suggests ( ... )
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Juhyun sighs, “It is but it doesn’t hurt to see him for a bit.”
“Actually it does.”
Maternal instincts to cuddle and protect Baekhyun level = 10000000000000000
the entire part when chanyeol in his phoenix form comes back carrying jongdae in his arms, baekhyun yanking jongdae's body to himself, his rage -- was really well written, beautiful and emotional!/applauds/ i felt like i was watching a movie - picturing the scenes in my mind!!
Desperately, Baekhyun cradles Jongdae's face with both of his hands and leans closer. He presses his forehead to Jongdae’s in an attempt somehow transfer the words in his head to Jongdae.
In a small voice, he says to him, “You're my only one, Jongdae, please.”O♥M♥G this is unnecessary information but i was reading Mindy Kaling's book and there's a part where she writes about how the most romantic moment for her was that part in Bridget Jones' where ( ... )
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I love Baekchen so much because of their friendship! They're so touchy and stuff irl that I wanted to bring some of that into the fic. >_< I feel like Baek irl is quite protective of JD so that's why. Hee! I actually brought a lot of my headcanon into writing them (and also my bias as you can probably tell) so asdfghjk I couldn't bear hurting them but for the sake fo the story XD
And yes it is from 902014 haha
The scene when CY brings JD was actually one of the first written scenes. I built everything around it HAHA
Baekchen cuddles and kisses are the best =D
I had a blast writing the side characters haha I was worried maybe I wrote about them a little bit too much but I'm glad you enjoyed them! Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Your comment made me very happy!
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While reading I imagined some kind of X-men world/set-up and I loved your story :)
Despite some heartbreaking undertones, you kept the fic light and flowing preventing it from becoming too heavy or angsty. The emotions were so touching though and I was so invested in your characters and the plot that I cried on more than one occassion. The love and bond between Baekhyun and Jongdae was really beautiful and the way that they complimented each other both with their powers as on an emotional level got me rooting for them from beginning to end :)
I realy enjoyed reading this and thank you for writing this!
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I actually did model a little bit after the x-men world amongst other things heehee
I'm really glad that the fic wasn't too much in any extreme. I added the jokes in, but I was so worried that they didn't fit in with the story. >_< I was worried about their relationship the most because I wasn't sure if it came across that they loved each other as much as I knew they did, so I'm glad to hear you say so!
I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting! <3
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Baekhyun forever protective of Jongdae and buys him shirts /cries
When Baek got jealous and they fought, it was so heartbreaking because they give each other silent treatment but Jongdae still asks about Baek's whereabouts anyways.
Just...this is perfect. All the litttle things they do to show they care for each other.
Definitely one of the best fics i have ever read.
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Baekhyun totally babies Jongdae, he can't help himself.The silent treatment was so stupid since they both were still asking about the other. But yeah, it made them closer! So all is well!
I'm glad you like the little details. I'm totally one for small gestures as opposed to big ones. XD
Thank you for reading and commenting!
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