Runs in my blood ✿ for skyroll

Jan 13, 2015 22:12

Title: Runs in my blood
Recipient: skyroll
Rating: PG-13
Side pairing/s: n/a
Word Count: 2043 words
Summary: They don't talk about it.
Warning/s: mentions of murder, some kind of strange voyeurism, arson, alcohol, some swearing, smut references

Notes: Thanks to C for letting me write this and thanks so much to the recipient for your fabulous prompts. I ( Read more... )

pairing: baekhyun/chen, rating: pg-13, !fic, !round1

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skyroll January 14 2015, 03:58:49 UTC
hey author let me LOVE YOU!

this was such a nice read and i just love how intimate these two are. their relationship, and how deep they've fallen for each other. casual flirting and come ons... i live for them, and they're practically dripping with them.

"Stop walking like that or you'll have to fuck me again," he laughed, the sound vibrating in his chest.
yes?

"I can't tell if I prefer undressing you or watching you dress." Baekhyun's voice had dropped half an octave and it wasn't the cigarette he hadn't smoked yet. "I'm imagining peeling those off you..."
fuck yes?

so much red. i wonder how much red is in their past, present, and future. so many secrets and little hints here and there.

also arsonists in love is killing me with feelings.

"You're so childish," Baekhyun laughed, but leaned over. Their mouth met, before their sunglasses.
yes!

thank you very much for this wonderful fic! i loved every moment of it! ^ o ^

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tiny_estrella January 15 2015, 04:55:21 UTC
this story was woah o.o it took me awhile to get the second smile in the beginning OTL BUT BAKECHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNN their relationship evne in this dark was so nbright i loved it how comfortsable they are togehtre how well they FIT and how you describe their convos as replays that never get old im <333333333333333333333

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shuxingxing January 18 2015, 18:41:02 UTC
This was so amazing. Your style really does remind me of Hills Like White Elephants, and Hemmingway with how detailed yet vague it was. There was so much left up to interpretation and I am terrible with understanding symbolism but the whole red on white and the thing with yesterday and tomorrow and today was just perfect. There are so many layers to unravel. I read this fic again and again and I still cannot stop thinking about it.

Thank you for this beautiful piece.

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ailiblue January 19 2015, 06:29:26 UTC
I wanted to leave a comment earlier but didn't have time, but here it is!

I really love the way you wrote this, I've never read any Grinsberg but Hemingway, I have. Like someone mentioned, the details and vagueness were great, especially with the way they talked to each other. The conversation between them is so interesting. Reveals one thing but another question pops up.

I'm going to probably try reading the two things you linked and then reread this, haha. Initially the warning turned me away but I was a bit curious and I'm glad I read it!

Thank you for writing! =]

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