Negotiations 41

[theconservatory]

Another chapter in just a week? I know, I know. I feel like I'm finding the groove I've been looking for. However, I did write most of this on my phone because my internet connection has been less than stellar this week, so if there are errors, feel free to tell me. Sometimes I miss them on a tiny screen. Please comment & let me know your thoughts

Comments

[toto_too514]

This was the perfect reward for me having to work on a Sunday!

Wow! Like Justin, I don't think that was what I expected... and I'm sure poor Dill couldn't have even imagined. But was perfect. I think it showed the deep connection between Brian and Justin and removed any lingering doubt that Dill might have had that his presence might interfere with that.

But another reason why the intensity in that dungeon works so well is that it is played against the normalcy of the boys' teasing... like about the fireplaces, the skeeball tickets, and the wine cellar (My mind immediately went to the same place as Brian's, LOL!

Looking forward to see how Dill handles all the rewards that Justin just earned him!

[theconservatory]

Your feedback is like a Christmas present, thank you! I never post a new chapter until the next one starts playing in my mind, and I reading feedback on a chapter gets my muse an adrenaline dump. It helps me pin down the beginning to the next one. I loved the fireplace drama. When I write these things, I don't really know what each character will say or say next, and it's always funny to me when one character says something and an unexpected response comes from someone else. Having Dill around, increases the chance that something funny will happen. In my mind, I was wondering why Justin has to pay for his time and Brian doesn't and before I could rationalize an answer to that, Justin was bitching at me about it. In that way, each scene is a gift to me for a few seconds, too. I don't think these characters will ever stop talking in my head. I hope I'm not still writing this when they're both in a retirement home and Brian is trying to spank Justin over his wheelchair or something, lol.

[toto_too514]

I hope they keep talking to you for avery long time to come!
That retirement home is in for some fun, LOL! (Although, thankfully, they don't age the way we do!)

[theconservatory]

What would be really funny is if Old Justin leans over Brian's wheelchair and Brian thinks he wants a spanking, and Justin is like, "Stop it! I was getting your teeth!" lol

[rulisteningbj]

Wow, so intensely wonderful. Never saw this coming. How lucky is Dill to experience this loving couple? So wonderful to have so many new chapters.

Dee Dee

[theconservatory]

Hi, Dee Dee! Thanks so much for letting me know you're here. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!!