Comments | theconservatory: Negotiations 28

theconservatory

Negotiations 28

Jan 13, 2019 10:24

Hi, happy 2019! As always, comments are appreciated. :)
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( Negotiations 28 )

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gaeln January 13 2019, 15:29:51 UTC

Happy 2019 to you also 😁

theconservatory January 13 2019, 22:57:43 UTC

Same to you!

toto_too514 January 13 2019, 19:10:48 UTC

What a nice way to start the New Year!

I LOVED this chapter!
And even though Justin is depressed - and injured - I felt the banter between them was uplifting. I especially liked Justin's half-drunk inner dialogue throughout... while sipping Target wine at Harper's and while sitting on the toilet, LOL!

I think this chapter plays well against the high-level intensity of the past few chapters. From Justin's pretty hilarious dream to Brian bringing him Skittles at the end. Justin's memory of the deli sandwich was a nice touch.

"He’s a giant paradox, he’s the strongest fragile person I know.”
That line is pretty damn perfect!

As always... now that I've read this chapter, I am automatically craving more!

Happy New Year!

theconservatory January 13 2019, 23:23:41 UTC

So glad you liked it. It was fun to write once I knew what I was writing, lol. There's nothing worse than being awakened from a dream starving because you were about to eat something amazing. I freaking hate when that happens.

mary_mccrone January 16 2019, 12:30:35 UTC

Can I just say? I am seriously happy that you still write about these two. I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Wonderful chapter too. Loved it.

calliesky February 14 2019, 21:31:03 UTC

Fantastic chapter. Thank you for making my week. I get so excited when you update this story. 🥰

theconservatory April 21 2019, 18:58:18 UTC

Sorry I didn't respond to this earlier. Thanks for the feedback!!