Negotiations 27

[theconservatory]

Hi, everyone! Just a reminder that this story is a writing experiment for me, and that I greatly appreciate your feedback. I imagine that some folks may be struggling with the reversed roles, but I kind of wanted that struggle because I believe that truth emerges from struggles. I hope you'll continue to share your thoughts. ~ Plum

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[toto_too514]

Another great installment!

I must admit that I am one of the ones struggling with the power exchange here. Although I'm sure it's not that unusual for two highly sexual people involved in such an intimate relationship. Still, my favorite part was Brian reminiscing about fisting Justin on those white sheets!

I think it's hysterical that Brian as already asked Ted about trying to get a tax break on their sex toys!

[theconservatory]

THANKS for your comments. I struggle with it, too, even while writing but I kind of want to struggle with it. The actual opening scene of the entire Negotiations series has yet to make it into the story because after I wrote it and really liked it, I realized that it couldn't happen without context. And I think that there's merit to the idea that these 2 men who've now been together for over 20 years, who love each other madly, who are highly sexual and highly intelligent would find their own way to (knowingly or unknowingly) keep their marriage from getting stale. Many male couples like this would simply grow apart and cheat, especially with an age difference, but they don't. They engage with one another. And while they know each other inside and out, they don't know one another well enough in these roles, so there's story there. There's growth. They show their work as if it's a math problem

[theconservatory]

Thanks so much for your feedback! It's a slow process, but slowly, Brian starts to find his own voice in this upside down world.

[anonymous]

I love the reverse rolls! Your story is amazing.

[theconservatory]

Thanks so much! Next chapter is up!