Negotiations 15

[theconservatory]

Go back to Negotiations 14 or start from the beginning. Enjoy!

Comments

[rulisteningbj]

Well played Justin. I have to say my favorite line that made me laugh was: "Yes, I think I’ve vacationed there...but I forgot to buy a t-shirt.” So well written.

Dee Dee

[theconservatory]

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it. Enjoy your weekend!!

[minerva_1]

Justin has handled the situation very well, and he has been able to promote the truth about Realase comes to light. I think he´s been pretty good in his Dom role, although the references to age of Brian have been really cruel XDXD

I´m anxious to know how his first day in Kinnetik goes.

Thank you for this chapter. Regards.

[theconservatory]

Thanks for the feedback! I agree that the comments are cruel ... Justin shows he can dominate in all sorts of ways--even organizationally, lol. I think Brian made his point tho. 😀

[toto_too514]

ALWAYS great to have an update, especially such a delightfully long one! And I know this chapter was very important to the very complex dynamic of Brian & Justin's relationship...

But I can't get past the line:
"It looks like your Amazon Prime account came into the room and vomited everywhere." out of my head! It is such a Brian thing to think, even in the midst of some serious relationship issues.

And: “Good. Want to come upstairs to bed with me now?” he offers. “Please. I can’t stand a mess like this.” My OCD self was thinking the same thing!

And something tells me from the last line, that the lesson isn't quite over yet!

[theconservatory]

Hi! I think Brian's OCD tendencies were a missed opportunity in QAF, lol. And I love that Justin can figure out ways to flaunt his power that have nothing to do with the way Brian flaunts his. Hee.

[randysgirl_645]

that was hot and so in character!!!

[theconservatory]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!!

[snow_white79]

I loved this!!!! Gaaaaah....I can't get any words to combine into a sentence that truly expresses how much I enjoy this series!