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[theconservatory]

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[toto_too514]

You continue to amaze... waiting with bated breath to see where this goes next.

[theconservatory]

aw, thank you. I liked this chapter too. :)

[snow_white79]

Another wonderful chapter. They really have moved and grown within their relationship and I can't wait to read what happens next.

[theconservatory]

thanks!

[randysgirl_645]

loved it!!! :) with change there is fear of the unknown!

[theconservatory]

exactly! thanks!

[cryforwhat]

Thank you for your update. It's quite a break.

You want to sketch him like this, the rolling hills of his shoulders, the valley of his lower back, the re-emergence of his hips and then the fading slope to his feet.
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Sometimes I forget Justin is always an artist at heart.

kisses you like he’s not going to see you for a hundred years when the water is shushed.
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I think my heart just melted.

[theconservatory]

aw! thanks for the feedback!

[dean1955]

The mystery continues. Who is in control, who is driving the desire and what will be the ultimate outcome. I have said this before, but there is such a rapturous push and pull dynamic going on right now.

Brian seems to want to absorb, while also pushing him to the edge. I wonder if the internal dialogue that Brian is having is causing him to question his own intentions and motives.

While on the other end, Justin seems to want to please Brian before Brian even asks. He also seems driven by an uncontrollable desire that may lead him sacrifice his own needs in order to please Brian.

There is one thing that is not a mystery, their passion and need for one another. That could not be more evident than in the beautifully written shower scene. Once again, the writing and imagery paints a picture of love.

[theconservatory]

the deeper we go, the more tentative it feels...
thanks for the feedback!